Comments | batgurl88: Criminal Minds - Hearts [Slash - Morgan/Reid

batgurl88

Criminal Minds - Hearts [Slash - Morgan/Reid - PG]

Feb 13, 2009 11:56

Title: Hearts
Fandom: Criminal Minds
Rating: PG
Summary: "Nothing says romance like sending your boyfriend into anaphylactic shock."
Disclaimer: I don't own Criminal Minds or any of its characters.
Pairing/Characters: Morgan/Reid established relationship

A/N: Written very quickly as part of the M/R Valentine's Day Challenge over at morganreid_cm .This is coming to ( Read more... )

ff100, pairing: morgan/reid, slash, fic: criminal minds

Comments 56

jujuberry136 February 13 2009, 17:32:27 UTC

Awww. So cute! Poor boys, the do seem to have a rocky relationship with anniversaries and other "firsts"

:D

Thanks for the fun fic!

batgurl88 February 13 2009, 17:37:30 UTC

LOL I figured between the two of them, things would have to be a bit rocky (in a good way). Thanks!

hobbits_friend February 13 2009, 17:32:57 UTC

aww, I almost feel more sorry for Morgan :)
I have to admit I'd be a bit miffed about having to go to the hospital ;)

batgurl88 February 13 2009, 17:38:07 UTC

I'd be miffed about it, too. But Reid's easy (to please). ;)

Thanks for reading!

jovi_diva February 13 2009, 17:56:52 UTC

This is very cute and the first Reid/Morgan fic I've read! I enjoyed the sweetness and fluff thoroughly. You've written them both rather well! :D

batgurl88 February 13 2009, 18:12:34 UTC

Oh jeez - I'm really glad you enjoyed it (really really glad), but go read one of the *real* M/R slash writers! lol Romance and slash is definitely not one of my strengths. But thank you very much.

maeve100 February 13 2009, 18:39:59 UTC

This is so cute.Awwwwww :D Valentines day might not be such a waste after all, if it produces this awesome fics!

Loved the boys characterizations and somehow I can just see them being dysfunctionaly functional. *sighs*

Lovely fic. And I have strawberry cravings now, hmmm.

P.S I admire anyone who can write fluff. For me it inevitably ends up cliched in the worst possible way *facepalm*

batgurl88 February 13 2009, 19:46:37 UTC

lol I'm not so sure *this* wasn't cliched in the worst possible way, but thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I think "dysfuntionally functional" is a great way of describing M/R.

shinealightonme February 13 2009, 18:43:50 UTC

OMG I LOVE YOU

Gotta run or I'll be late for class, but I'm eagerly looking forward to reading this, okay? And I'll have more to say when I do!

shinealightonme February 13 2009, 21:18:09 UTC

The anticipation was killing me during class, I just wanted to read this so bad...and it was even better than I hoped! It's such a perfect mix of adorable and hilarious and the boys are very much themselves and in character. I absolutely love how positive Reid is throughout the whole thing, and how much Morgan is trying to make him happy (without realizing that he doesn't need to try so hard). The description of their relationship is so wonderful, because of course they can't just have anything be simple (and, you know, if you wanted to explore their relationship further, well, I would not mind at all *coughPLEASEcough*). This fic is fluffy without being cloying or frivolous - just sweet and heartwarming and fun and I mentioned I loved it, right? Because I totally do.

Have no fear, hon, you owned this slash, seriously.

batgurl88 February 13 2009, 21:35:59 UTC

XD Thank you so much!! I was worried it would come across as cloying or frivolous fluff (especially with the last lines), so I'm really glad that you didn't find it so. And that you thought they were in character, because I was fretting over the possibility of making them seem too lovey-dovey lol. I don't know if I'd have the guts or inspiration to explore their relationship any further, but thanks. Hope your class was good!

shinealightonme February 13 2009, 21:46:31 UTC

I thought the last few lines were adorable actually. And they weren't ridiculously lovey-dovey or anything - very much in love, sure, but that's not such a bad thing. I feel like the inclusion of the previous details about their relationship was a good move because (aside from just being hilarious, which it was, totally) that paragraph also just has little hints of seriousness, which really helped to keep it from getting too mushy. If that makes sense (I suspect it doesn't). And even if you don't have any inspiration to write more about them, well, this is an AWESOME fic so it's quite good enough to stand alone.

Eh, class was class. A bit dull, not too bad. Having this to look forward to sure made it go by faster, though! ^_^