Under His Wing, Ch. 3

Sep 05, 2011 14:00

Title: Under His Wing, Ch. 3
Rating: G
Word count: 915
Notes: This is set in the Teen Titans toonverse, with guest appearance by Tim Drake. Yes, I am aware that does not compute. Just go with it.
Warning: Fourth wall breakage. Mostly by Robins, current or former.
Summary: Cyborg tries to understand just what is going on.
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sashas87 September 5 2011, 22:57:50 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you like this, and dropped me a line to let me know. The last bit just seemed like something snarky Jason would have done. Of course, now poor Starfire will be wondering if the bat-brats actually do have white eyes. After all, hers glow solid green at times. Poor Starfire!

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sashas87 September 8 2011, 04:49:29 UTC
She totally will. I wonder if anyone will bother explaining that he was teasing her to Starfire? She's so literal that it might not take, even if someone tried.

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sashas87 September 6 2011, 02:07:41 UTC
Glad to tickle your funny bone! Thanks for letting me know you liked this!

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anonymous September 6 2011, 11:12:43 UTC
I like the way you let Cyborg be the one in charge of exposition. The way he recapped and his reactions let the story be just plausible enough and also enhance the absurdness of the situation.

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sashas87 September 7 2011, 00:54:07 UTC
Thanks! Cyborg just felt like the right one to go with. He's a pretty logical guy, so he'd break it down and analyze each piece, confirm that he has it all correct, and then try to figure out how to confirm all of the wild and crazy stuff he's been told. I imagine he's trying to figure out why he hasn't seen plot bunnies before, and figure out how to scan for them. After he runs another virus scan on himself.

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malkavianlove September 6 2011, 12:58:08 UTC
Another great chapter. I adored the last lines, they're pure Jason. And *WooT* for Monty Python references. I quote that movie constantly. And plot bunnies are definitely not funny, they're vicious demanding little creatures that will gnaw on your brain.

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sashas87 September 7 2011, 00:50:04 UTC
I'm glad you think I have Jason's voice down. I was a bit worried about him, so its good to hear that I hit it properly. Monty Python is hilarious, and I believe plot bunnies might be related to the Rodents of Unusual Size. Thanks for the support!

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robin_lea September 7 2011, 03:21:40 UTC
Bravo! Another fun chapter, just the thing for a bedtime story. :) Great dialog from all as poor Cyborg tries to make sense of the trio of Robins. Thanks for sharing!

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sashas87 September 7 2011, 16:47:09 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! Also, your cross-stitch icon is adorable.

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