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Under His Wing

Aug 24, 2011 00:13

Title: Under His Wing ( Read more... )

Comments 24

dylogger August 24 2011, 12:21:26 UTC

Fourth wall breakage is always awesome.

xD

sashas87 August 24 2011, 17:03:47 UTC

Eee! First comment on first fic! *is excited* I'm glad you thought my fourth wall breakage was awesome!

animegoil August 24 2011, 12:42:20 UTC

That was beyond fabulous. Absolutely hilarious, I seriously think this is the first time I've seen someone break the fourth wall in such an amusing (and oddly plausible) way in fic before ♥

You win the internetz.

Since they write in a non-linear pattern

BWAHAHAHAHAHA.

sashas87 August 24 2011, 17:06:29 UTC

I'm glad you liked that. I had the specific scene in mind, but after I wrote it, I realized I couldn't figure out how on Earth they had gotten there. That, and mental!Robin looked straight at me and smirked. He totally did kill the plot bunnies while I wasn't looking.

animegoil August 24 2011, 22:36:38 UTC

Hahaha, well that was a clever way of solving the problem XD

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sashas87 August 24 2011, 17:07:43 UTC

Thanks for the comment! And where did you get your icon? I love it!

lorena_at_large August 24 2011, 15:28:59 UTC

Awwww, completely adorable, and filled with win! I love that Timmy ran to his big brother, who vaporized the evil plot bunnies. That was so cute, and Cyborg's reaction was great.

Thank you for the smile.

sashas87 August 24 2011, 17:19:54 UTC

Yeah, poor Cyborg is wondering what is going on, and all the answers he gets just makes it worse. And Timmy totally ran to big brother to make it all better. It went something like this:
*Timmy shows up, running full tilt for Robin, who is training outside. Robin looks to see what is chasing him, sees flood of bunnies* "Oh no. We are not going down that road again, not if I can help it!" *flings little explody disks* 'beep beep beep BOOM' *Timmy tugs Robin's cape* "Yeah, little brother?" *shows bite from cuddle bunny* "Mmm, well that could have been a lot worse. C'mon, we'll go cuddle." *tucks Timmy against side, under cape which is suddenly ankle length. Blinks, frowns, slams edge of cape that has 'as the plot demands' bunny against nearest hard surface. Continues walking into tower*

zolac_no_miko August 25 2011, 08:47:39 UTC

SO VERY META. IT'S DELIGHTFUL.

ladyblkrose August 24 2011, 20:49:02 UTC

Congrats on your first posting! and what a wonderful post it is, so very cute and adorable. Love the broken 4th wall and Cyborg was just too lost for words!
Thank you for being so brave and sharing this. I will be looking forward to more of your work

sashas87 August 24 2011, 22:34:48 UTC

Thanks! You guys have been so great that I'm actually considering doing a second chapter, where the rest of the team stumbles in. And can you blame Cyborg for being lost? Poor guy wakes up, and finds weird stuff happening. He'd be expecting craziness if the alarm had woken him, but no, this is just plain oddness with no warning.