A Short. Short Story

Sep 18, 2008 19:35

Something I wrote for 50wordstory:

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bast2 September 19 2008, 01:59:11 UTC
Thanks for reading...Chaos

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sterling_sky September 19 2008, 07:36:32 UTC
That was beautiful. Maybe not the best bedtime story I've ever read, but absolutely stunning nonetheless.

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bast2 September 19 2008, 13:05:02 UTC
I thank you. Love the icon from the long ago album The Free Wheelin' Bob Dylan.

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ankahi_talaash September 19 2008, 11:12:31 UTC
Amazing. Excellent context, written so well, leaves the full feeling blowing out of my being. Tx for sharing.

Best/
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bast2 September 19 2008, 13:05:41 UTC
Thank YOU for reading!

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lydonwrites September 19 2008, 12:15:14 UTC
I liked this!

Oh, and I was just taken with putting up a story last night, after reviewing the fact I hadn't put one up on 50word since May.

I'm slippin. You, though, are not. Good work!

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bast2 September 19 2008, 13:06:35 UTC
Thanks so much--and you really SHOULD contribute again.

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ci_dialog_caps March 9 2010, 01:14:33 UTC
CHILLING and creepy. Nicely done

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bast2 March 9 2010, 01:40:24 UTC
Done a while back...I had forgotten this, but thanks to you I'm renewing my acquaintance...

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