(no subject)

[bass_is_sexy]

OK, so I guess Im gonna post these 2 poems i wrote. Theyre for our poetry assignment in english. The second one is more like song lyrics then a poem, but im gonna call it a poem so i can turn it in. I wouldnt recomend reading the second one if your a republican. Give me feed back on it, and be honest, good or bad, i appriciate both.

This one doesnt have a title yet...

I must be tired, because I'm seeing things
Spots of white that flicker then fade
Streaks of color that shoot by my head

I see you in the corner of my eye
Outside my window you lurk
A bright light that blinds me, and makes me see
You were never really there

My reflection looks back and speaks
Your losing your mind
I look again and youve taken it's place

We will be together again
Tommorow we will do this right
I close my eyes so that I can see
A cars lights mold into your eyes

I must be tired, because I'm falling asleep
A nights rest will do me good
I will sleep now and wait for your ghost again

This ones called "W"

Drop more bombs on more heads.
Ignore the cries of the innocent.
Bullets in the barrel are soon bullets in the heart.
Ignore the screams of their children.

So who needs reasons for war?
Make more false claims
Lie lie lie untill you die
Is what your all about
Tell the people they are not safe
And they will do anything you say

Imprison more people from more countries.
Fair trials are a thing of the past.
When future is spelt with a W,
Thats not a future I want to be in.

Lie more to even more people.
Ignore the protests of many.
Votes are not anymore a necessity.
How could so many people be so wrong?

So who needs reasons to kill?
Tell us we are in danger.
If its good for W,
It must be good for you too.
Tell the people what they want to hear,
And they will do anything you say.

So tell me what you think. hope you liked them.