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noor_us_sabah November 3 2011, 22:49:10 UTC
You just happy me in every respect, you know that, right?!

I love your Justin here, especially the bit about him being a gentleman, which is followed by him discussing his sister while he (thinks he) is having sex with his girlfriend. Oh, Justin.

And of course I love that this is just how Alex gets her kicks, naturally it is, wouldn't EVERY sister with a crush on her brother magically transform herself to look like his girlfriend? Obvs she would.

It also totally explains why that was his first thought, of course, when it was Harper. Love, love, love.

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baroqueriot November 4 2011, 01:19:42 UTC
Heeee GOOD.

And yet, Justin sees nothing incongruous about being a gentlemanly lover and mentioning his sister. Which says it all, really.

I figured there just hadd to be a reason that was his first thought. Because seriously, what kind of first thought is that? That your sister is there to try to make out with you just for kicks? lollllllllll

anyway, so glad you loved it!

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norahenrie November 5 2011, 19:01:16 UTC
Yay, I missed entries for the omgkingmeme!
And wow, you just totally threw me off there, it's obviously been a while ago since I've read a good M-rated oneshot.

I liked how Justin reasoned him shouting Alex's name, and while I probably wouldn't be pleased with it if I would've been Juliet (if it would've been Juliet that is), Justin has never been a good liar anyway, and I'm pretty sure she didn't really care at that moment.

And only Alex could make him believe that it was just a dream even though he woke up naked and with her panties still in his bed.

This was also a good way to explain why he at first wanted to make sure that it wasn't Alex in Moving On, because really, I'd never even think about my sister pretending to be my girlfriend if I were Justin no matter how sneaky and cunning she is. But that's just Justin and Alex I guess.

I loved it!

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baroqueriot November 5 2011, 20:23:35 UTC
LOL, would you believe that is my first time ever writing non-fade-to-black sex? Glad to hear it isn't terrible.

And even if it HAD been Juliet in his bed, I think she still might have accepted the explanation. She's never really questioned or tried to come between the codependance Alex and Justin have, and I still laugh when I think about that time Justin and Juliet kissed and Juliet said his hand was too low and it was actually Alex groping her ass.

Glad you liked the Moving On explanation too, since the first time I watched that ep I was like "...well that is a very interesting and specific conclusion to immediately leap to, Justin."

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the love!

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darkly_perfect November 7 2011, 19:52:53 UTC
Oh god I loved this. I kind of always wondered about Justin asking if Alex was pretending to be Juliet, when Harper was.

And the sex scene was definitely enjoyable!

^_^

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