Again, with Feeling

[baroncognito]

This story is about Three or Four years old, I'd guess. I did a first draft and got feed back, but never re-wrote it. I kept all the comment papers though, and here I am with the second draft. If you have any input, feel free to comment. Thanks.

It was a quiet day for Samantha, but then, most days were. She finished work and went down to the park to

Comments

[simpletwice]

I like it.

Is it meant to be complete in itself, or is it a beginning?

[baroncognito]

It doesn't feel entirely complete, but I had no intention of using these characters again, so I suppose it should be complete in itself.