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Apr 24, 2008 18:46

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fullofheart April 28 2008, 20:38:46 UTC
That evil creep is annoying you so?
I have to add that he really must go.
He's quite a brat, and obnoxious too.
Mephiles is bugging everyone; not just you.

I'm annoyed at the fact he does not quit.
This method definitely shows a stubborn wit.
Many have been affected; many are in trouble.
It's best if we stop it on the double.

How I don't know, and when has no clue.
It all depends on what we do.
We have to hurry; I fear there's no time.
And so this ends my fragile rhyme.

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1/2 baron_vn_blubba April 29 2008, 16:11:07 UTC
2/2 baron_vn_blubba April 29 2008, 16:30:24 UTC
It brings my non-heart joy and oh!
That you could rhyme while speaking so
honestly about your feelings
and about the current dealings!

True, the rhythm is not perfect,
but it's wonderous! I'll not object
to reading a little more!
Perhaps you could come to my door?

I live above an eatery.
It's a fine place, as you'll see,
and Papa Tony's kind to me.
I'm sure you'll find it's loverly.

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'How I laugh at thee' is ref towards Rhythm, not the Baron. ^^; fullofheart April 30 2008, 22:19:07 UTC
Thank you for your compliment!
The wisest word is the only one sent.
And confusing myself with words is common,
If I'm the only one who knows what it means.

Rhythm! How I laugh at thee,
for true poets truely can see
That the beat itself has no taste--
Unless the poet can make it so by writing.

I'd love to visit the place where you reside,
speak your poetry, but can also abide
by the kindness of those about you.
I'll visit you whenever you wish.

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XD Baron gets pissed when his notions are dissed. baron_vn_blubba May 1 2008, 00:26:14 UTC
Rhythm matters very much
when writing in ways that have touch
and sound and smell that rhyme at ends;
without you shan't make amends.

If freestyle is your writing choice,
and with it take your rhyming voice,
then no, rhythm need not lie...
However, with rhyme? Do apply.

I've been a poet many years;
I've tasted salt from poet's tears
throgh words on paper and through song.
There's very little that is wrong!

However, bah! I am but old;
perhaps the future's yours to hold
and rhyming poems are dying out.
If this is true, then sigh! I pout!

Please yes! And yes! Come visit me!
I long to have a face to see.
Or perhaps a true blue friend
who will remain until the end.

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Kairi will make him smile; if not now, in a while. ^^ fullofheart May 1 2008, 16:35:42 UTC
Your point is very clear indeed,
And I admit to defeat.
for the rhymes of one such as yourself,
cannot--ever--be beat.

Rhythm and rhyme both are the same,
I failed to realize it so.
for without one you cannot have the other,
And this is also so;

For all your age, you taught me much,
In that short amount of time.
For now I know it pleases you so,
If I still speak in rhyme.

I am one who does stay true--
There are few here that can say I do.
Your poetry's rhythm melded into mine
Towards the end; an interesting time.

Pick one day out of the week,
A day that's good for you.
And on that day I will be sure to visit;
I promise that's what I'll do.

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Re: Kairi will make him smile; if not now, in a while. ^^ baron_vn_blubba May 3 2008, 18:01:35 UTC
Pick one day out of the week?
A day that's good for me...
I would say Friday's what I seek
but cannot currently.

However, though, I could just flee
and avoid this commotion.
I'd much rather spend time with thee;
that truly is my notion.

[[ooc: Baron's fed up with the situation at home, thus he's running away.]]

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