prompt 6: The Adventures of Moony and Padfoot on the London Underground

[closetflorist]

Title: The Adventures of Moony and Padfoot on the London Underground
Characters/Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: Adult
Disclaimer: All your characters are belong to Jo.
Summary: After going out to the theater (The theater Moony, really.) Remus and Sirius decide to take the Tube, for some reason, and Sirius Black may or may not fall in love more than once.

Comments

[sleeper6]

Okay, first, the boys' mannerisms and mundane actions (smoking, sitting, talking) are spot on. I can so picture this scene. And the way they talk--my gosh, they sound so real. I love how Sirius is so weirded out by the date business--very funny. The ending? Oh, wow.

Btw, okay if I friend you? I'm really enjoying the fics you're writing for this comm.

[closetflorist]

Your comments are ♥. You've no idea how glad I am that they sound real to you, that's all I ever want people to get out of my fic!

Totally friend away!

[little_werewolf]

Wonderful fanfic! Great job.

[closetflorist]

Thanks so much!

[leavesoflorien]

Um, wow. Speechless. One word sentences. Okay, now three.

You have the characters absolutely NAILED. Your writing is fantastic. I'll report back when coherence returns.

[closetflorist]

Incoherence FTW! :DD Thank you!

[redex]

Now that is what this comm really needs: Porn. XD; ♥

[closetflorist]

*blush* I couldn't resist tube secks. :p

[penhaligonblue]

Um... *flails*

Not sure what else to say. Damn, you can write.

[closetflorist]

Whoo! Thank you! ♥