apéritif

[edoriko]

apéritif (the devoured ones; part one)
kaichen & slight suchen
pg-13; 3.9k
-loosely based on Hannibal
-warnings: violent imagery
-a rewrite of an earlier story

Comments

[daybreakstorm]

This looks really cool :O but it feels like a tiny introduction to a much larger story. Is there more to this universe planned? I just met all of these characters but I'd love to see more of what's happening and why.

I love that jongdae slipped and said "I" but unlike most mysteries it wasn't an actual slip but just a quirk of how he does his work. I really thought he was the killer when that happened but the empathy thing is really unique ^^

Ahhhhh I really hope that I could see more of this story ;; but thank you for sharing this with us ^^

[edoriko]

Yes, I have about six more chapters planned for this!!! *u*

I stole the empathy disorder from the Hannibal tv show haha... The plot's going to be different but some of the characters and personalities overlap a little.

Thanks so much for commenting! It really makes me feel motivated to try to write more. =u=

[silverchen]

This is super cool! I think it's too early to guess but imma bet that the killer is either gonna be jongin or joonmyun...
probs wrong tho
Hehe image if it's minseok lol
Anyway this was really well written and I really enjoyed it!! Thanks for doing the hard work and writing it ❤❤

[edoriko]

Guess you'll have to wait and see... ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm working on the second part but there's a lot I want to include so it'll take awhile haha

Thank you for commenting!! ❤ ❤