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Roll the Dice, Matt Planned the Party, Part Two

May 13, 2009 08:54

Title: Roll the Dice, Matt Planned the Party, Part Two
Writer: Left_of_Weir
Fandom: bare: a pop opera
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Peter/Jason
Summary: What happens when Lucas throws Peter a welcome party and everyone goes home.

Part One of Roll the Dice, Matt Planned the Party

Part Two of Roll the Dice, Matt Planned the Party

( With difficulty, Jason quelled his instinct to fight back, and decided to trust in Peter. Having lived with him for the past three years, he knew that Peter was not a cruel boy. On the other hand, if this was Peter taking revenge on him because of what Jason did before vacation, then Jason decided that he probably deserved it. )

pairing: peter/jason, smut, fic, author: left_of_weir

Comments 4

shanwowrites May 13 2009, 02:34:53 UTC

Ugh...I'm a sucker for some smut. ;)

This was very good! I really liked how one of the would think that the other would think the opposite of what they were thinking. (That makes sense in my brain!) It really showed the tension between Peter and Jason.

shanwowrites May 13 2009, 02:35:31 UTC

By the way, the is shannonsims. I just made myself a new fic journal, so don't be confused about the name change. ;)

left_of_weir May 13 2009, 03:05:30 UTC

Thank you. I really really value this kind of concrit.

I feel that I should do better at containing the language so that this opposition would be more subtle, and yet more evident. As it is, it's freaky long, and was even longer in the first pass.

Gahh, next song fic, left_of_weir, next fic.

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left_of_weir September 7 2009, 19:31:37 UTC

Thank you for reading it :)