Feb 24, 2014 09:04
Lacuna, by David Adams, is a flat space opera.
Good features: Um ... the spelling and grammar are fine. It's original, not a
rip-off of any particular other work I could identify. Some details are nice:
see below.
The plot is pretty straightforward. Humans invent some useful space and
space-weapon technology, in the lampshadey "Chekhov Arsenal". Unknown aliens
show up and destroy three cities and say "Don't work on the jump drive on pain
of death" (in bad Chinese), and vanish. So humans build three giant
space-battleships to defend themselves, and tangle with the aliens, and
there's fighting and some victory. (This is book 1 of a series.) This is not
inherently boring, and a good writer could do a lot with it. But the quality
of this space opera is in the details, and, though David Adams certainly
tries, the details don't sing.
Case in point, with minor spoilers: the aliens don't want humans (or anyone
but themselves) to use the jump drive. The reason, when they get to explain
it surprizingly late in the story, is sensible enough. Once in a while, the
jump drive accidentally creates a singularity that wrecks the star system it's
in. It ate the aliens' home world, and so they don't like it at all. This is
a good idea! But: the aliens use the jump drive constantly and freely.
They won't let anyone else use it because of those singularities,
but they use it despite that possibility. Also, humans
insist on using it, without any qualms, despite knowing that it could destroy
the Solar System.
Case in point: the jump drive cannot be used inside a gravity field.
(Presumably, of a certain strength - everything is within a gravity field.)
But Adams says that it can be used at Lagrange points. Now, there's a certain
sense there - Lagrange points are where two gravity fields, say Earth and
Moon, balance. But they aren't gravity-free. There are other gravity
fields around, like the Sun's, and the galaxy's for that matter. (Also,
wouldn't any point between starts work fine? Go a couple light-weeks from the
Sun and the gravity is weaker than at any Lagrange point in the inner solar
system. This would ruin an important plot point.)
But this could be forgiven if the characters were interesting. They're not.
They're flat and flavorless, and when Adams tries to make them have a
personality (as with the wisecracking science lead) it's even worse. They have
lots of sex and a few conflicts, but there's no passion or interest there. The
alien commander suddenly acquires a personal vendetta against the human
captain, wanting to torture her by killing her entire species while she
watches. OK, he has a good reason to be angry - she did just do a Pearl Harbor
kind of thing on his military base - but his posturing and sneering is
stereotypically and melodramatically evil, and it's unclear why he would care
about her in particular. An honorable or cold-blooded enemy would
make a lot more sense.
It's not the worst free e-book I've started by any means.
But it's in the bottom
20% of e-books that I've finished, so it gets one Lagrange point out
of five.