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Sep 19, 2006 13:23

Hmm. Usually I'm not terribly literal-minded about some of the bodytags writers use, e.g. "His eyes roamed over her" does not make me think the squishy orbs popped out of his head and rolled about.

But I just read “[dialogue] he said, grinning into her eyes" and it made me twitch. Get your mouth off my eyes!

bad prose

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