May 30, 2011 17:06
Once again someone used "broach" for "brooch."
I'm beginning to think it's all the same very bad copyeditor.
Same book, a little later:
Dear author,
It doesn't matter if the heroine actually does want to sleep with the "hero." Having him blackmail her into the sack still makes him a complete asshole.
Also also: I hereby declare that no author may set a romance novel in Scotland and have someone drown in a loch. I'm sure that real people do indeed drown in them, but the population of romance-novel Scots seem to be particularly bad swimmers.
Having someone get eaten by a leftover plesiosaur would be an acceptable loch-related death.
words that confuse people,
bad prose