Argh.

May 30, 2011 17:06


Once again someone used "broach" for "brooch."

I'm beginning to think it's all the same very bad copyeditor.

Same book, a little later:

Dear author,
It doesn't matter if the heroine actually does want to sleep with the "hero." Having him blackmail her into the sack still makes him a complete asshole.

Also also: I hereby declare that no author may set a romance novel in Scotland and have someone drown in a loch. I'm sure that real people do indeed drown in them, but the population of romance-novel Scots seem to be particularly bad swimmers.

Having someone get eaten by a leftover plesiosaur would be an acceptable loch-related death.

words that confuse people, bad prose

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