Comments | barbarajeanine: Too Many Kisses

barbarajeanine

Too Many Kisses

Oct 03, 2006 15:04

Stephen kissed me in the spring,
Robin in the fall,
But Colin only looked at me
And never kissed at all.

Stephen's kiss was lost in jest,
Robin's lost in play,
But the kissin Colin's eyes
Haunts me night and day.

(I didn't write this, but wish I had with different names)

Comments 7

ext_7150 October 4 2006, 08:29:39 UTC

i really like that poem
and im not a poetry sort of kid

anonymous October 4 2006, 14:54:56 UTC

You should've just written them in. ~Teasdale

barbarajeanine October 5 2006, 21:17:19 UTC

...says the person who wont even leave their real name.

anonymous October 5 2006, 22:38:17 UTC

This Colin guy sounds like a creep. I'd steer clear.

anonymous October 7 2006, 10:00:29 UTC

you really should've kissed Colin.

<3Francis.

anonymous October 7 2006, 10:01:16 UTC

this was me but for some reason, it didn't include the part where i wrote my name.

-francis.

something_kaye October 7 2006, 21:08:17 UTC

man oh man -- Nice poem Jean. Or poem choice...or yes.