Songs for Daddy- Chapter 28: Wonderwall

Aug 08, 2009 13:46

Author: bar_ohki

Title: Songs for Daddy

Rating: This chapter is rated T.

Summary: After receiving a phone call, Hiruma abandons his job, his football team, and his friends, disappearing into nothing. After several years pass, Mamori finds a strange girl in her Kindergarten class, a girl strange enough to have the only remaining connection to the ( Read more... )

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zelha August 8 2009, 22:32:02 UTC
YES! The long awaited confession and shameless HiruMamo fluff!! :DDDDDD

I loved it, hon, you nailed it. <333

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bar_ohki August 8 2009, 22:33:08 UTC
I was totally worrying about not having done it right! That's why this chapter took me so long!

I'm glad you liked it though.

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glassdarkly August 8 2009, 22:41:44 UTC
^_____^ yessssssss finally I'm so happy :P I like how you conveyed the emotion and maturity. now that this love declaration is out of the way, whats next??

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bar_ohki August 8 2009, 22:51:49 UTC
What's next? The court hearing of course!

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wintaerland August 9 2009, 04:15:18 UTC
1) The doctor needs to die
2) Saburo needs to die
3) Agon needs to suffer
4) Chizue needs to die again
5) YESH! HIRUMAMO FLUFF!!!!

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bar_ohki August 9 2009, 04:55:57 UTC
1) Don't worry, bad things happen to him later.
2) No she needs therapy and serious medication.
3) Nozomi will make his life hell *grin*.
4) They kind of re-killed her already? That's what the fading away was.
5) AGREED!

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wintaerland August 9 2009, 17:50:13 UTC
1) Bad, enjoyable-punch-my-fist-into-the-air, bad things?
2) Will she be locked away during the therapy?
3) Hehehe! You know, I actually didn't realized that she was Agon's daughter until I went back to check for her name. *headdesk* I thought you said in an earlier chapter that her dad was dead?
4) Allow me to rephrase myself... Die again while suffering horrid horrid terrible torture (or whatever)
5) *dances dances*

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bar_ohki August 9 2009, 18:25:34 UTC
1) I'm not spoiling the ending.
2) She gets to sit next to the crazy old cat lady.
3) Now that? That'll be explained in detail later. But I will also remind you that Nozomi technically carries her mother's last name.
4) What's more horrible than being forgotten and ignored to an attention whore?
5) *dancing with you*

^^

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dayofcaligula August 9 2009, 05:04:48 UTC
Oh, this made me smile lots hahaha! I'm a happy human; this made my day!

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bar_ohki August 9 2009, 05:06:14 UTC
Yay for happiness!

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dani1311 August 9 2009, 06:27:32 UTC
that was beautiful! it made me very happy too ^-^ HiruMamo is the best!!!

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bar_ohki August 9 2009, 06:28:23 UTC
Thank you. I was actually really worried it wasn't coming off well. So I'm glad it did. ^^

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