[Fic] A Lesson in Sharing

Jun 11, 2009 15:39

Author: bar_ohki

Title: A Lesson in Sharing

Rating: T for swearing and use of fire.

Summary: Sometimes things just had to be done in a Hiruma-style, even for Mamori.

Notes: Inspired by this: picture from the manga

A Lesson in Sharing

The members of the Disciplinary Committee were nice people, but sometimes Mamori thought ( Read more... )

es 21, hiruma, hirumamo, mamori, fanfic, eyeshield 21

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wintaerland June 11 2009, 23:04:55 UTC
I loved this one since it kept both of them really in character without Mamori being too weak or strong.

Oh what I would give to see the Committee's faces

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bar_ohki June 11 2009, 23:06:03 UTC
They were priceless.

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kiokushitakaa June 11 2009, 23:32:40 UTC
XD!

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bar_ohki June 11 2009, 23:36:03 UTC
*grin*

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kiokushitakaa June 11 2009, 23:37:28 UTC
I can only imagine how turned on Hiruma must've been seeing her get like that~ hurhurhur

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hari_koen June 12 2009, 01:48:40 UTC
OMG, there's just no hope for Deimon XD I can just see evil Mamori and Suzuna teaming up one day to over throw Hiruma.

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bar_ohki June 12 2009, 02:05:28 UTC
They are the loveable sort of evil pair.

You'd hope the Committee would be less stupid after this.

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skyfang June 12 2009, 08:59:25 UTC
laughing with glee right now! hahaha! I love that comic panel too. hehehe, nice one!

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bar_ohki June 12 2009, 18:27:47 UTC
This was born out of post-exam stress. I think it came out just fine. ^^

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lampazo_libre June 12 2009, 10:42:51 UTC
I liked the style of this thing, and the whole idea, although Mamori was slightly OOC - but I don't think it's crutial for crack genre)
There were some phrases inside that i loved, too)

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bar_ohki June 12 2009, 18:28:12 UTC
I don't care, there was fire!

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