Songs For Daddy- Chapter 9: For You I Will

[bar_ohki]

Author: bar_ohki

Title: Songs for Daddy

Rating: This chapter is rated T.

Summary: After receiving a phone call, Hiruma abandons his job, his football team, and his friends, disappearing into nothing. After several years pass, Mamori finds a strange girl in her Kindergarten class, a girl strange enough to have the only remaining connection to the

Comments

[wintaerland]

I like how this chapter answers all the questions that the last chapter brought up, nicely done.

GOOOO TEAM!

actually for them, it would be more like "We. Will. KILL. THEM! YA-HA!"

[bar_ohki]

Yes, its we'll kill them ya-ha!

Its only a matter of time before Emiko starts saying that you know *wink*.

Thank you for reading.

[zelha]

YAY! SENA IS IN DA JAUZ! :D

I loved the little daddy/daughter scene. And Mamori is starting to regroup the good ol' Devilbats! I'm happy. :D

[bar_ohki]

Yup, finally some good news!

Thank you for reading. ^^

[wannabiie]

Fuuuuuuuuck!
I almost cried!!! >/////<
The song, the story & the father/daughter scene...
Was simply killing me!
The song and THAT scene... were in TOTAL harmony...just.. simple PERFECTION! *////*

[bar_ohki]

I work really hard on making the songs and the chapters match as perfectly as possible. It's always rewarding to know someone went back and checked to see how well it was done. So thank you.