LJ Idol S10, Week 5: Fear is the Heart of Love

[banyangirl1832]

A few miles away from here, there’s a lady singing in a bar, and I love her, and she loves me. But I’m not at the bar now. I should be, but as I open up the church door and slip inside, I remind myself that there is more important work to do tonight. Something I’ve been putting off for a long while, and the time to complete it grows short

Comments

[favoritebean]

I really liked this.

[banyangirl1832]

Thank you!

[penpusher]

cleverly crafted tale with some really nice details. The description of Father Deegan stood out really well. Nice!

[banyangirl1832]

Thank you for your kind words!

[i_17bingo]

I could read stories about Beverly Chang and Father Deegan all day. He's charming as a roguish priest, and she's got a lot going on. You were able to breathe life into them with just a few words. Fantastic!

[banyangirl1832]

I really like Father Deegan and Beverly, too :)

[eternal_ot]

I really enjoyed this take. Would love to see more of these characters again. Liked the way you seamlessly incorporated the prompt. Good Job! Kudos!

[banyangirl1832]

I'm glad to hear that because I was worried I was being way too obvious and clunky with it. Thanks!

[garnigal]

Oh, I like this a lot. I'd love to read more about Beverly and her family and friends.

[banyangirl1832]

Thanks for reading and commenting!