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Mar 11, 2005 05:24

An Analysis of the Existence of God ( Read more... )

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Neither talent nor graceful genius guide this abomination of creativity... icehealer March 16 2005, 08:35:16 UTC

This essay exhibits the objectivity of a right-wing diatribe, making you no better than your supposed logic-lacking opponents. Your positions are of a more personal, subjective nature and rely almost exclusively on compromised biases. You often misuse words in what I can only imagine is an effort to boost your MS Word reading level, though, with enough moderate effectiveness to fool the casual reader ( ... )

Re: Neither talent nor graceful genius guide this abomination of creativity... bankie March 16 2005, 09:30:13 UTC

There are a number of things that are just wrong about your response, and I'm not sure where to begin ( ... )

Re: Neither talent nor graceful genius guide this abomination of creativity... ttox March 16 2005, 09:54:09 UTC

Here's a tip with your collegiate writing: don't end sentences with prepositions.

Re: Neither talent nor graceful genius guide this abomination of creativity... icehealer March 17 2005, 03:29:13 UTC

Rest assured, NOTHING I've ever turned in to a college professor has had dangling participles. My collegiate prepositions know their place and an on-line blog is hardly university writing.

Thread 6

Must we be so petty? icehealer March 16 2005, 20:55:18 UTC

1) I can understand the 5AM thing. Lord knows I've had my fair share of those essay experiences. Given those circumstances, yes, errors are allowed and even expected ( ... )

Re: Must we be so petty? bankie March 16 2005, 23:52:34 UTC

actually those last two comments weren't mine. i wanted to stay away from the name calling.

Re: Must we be so petty? icehealer March 17 2005, 03:28:20 UTC

Yeah, I just noticed that.
Sorry for missing that before.