story
here is the start of the story i'v been writing, if you are interested talk to me and i can send you more. It gets good!
Start with the middle.
Letting the music swirl past his head and ooze down to his feet, Sunny started to dance. Moving his hands first to his head, as the electronic pitter-patter slid over the yawning bass, elation crept over his shadowed face until a grin transpired and evaporated into the movement of his gliding feet.
Thick with the sweat of the room, Bella fixed her eyes on the dancing man. No-one came close to him, there was a natural barrier, a hormonal signal, he was given space.
As Sunny continued to move, his feet never staying still, signals from Bella’s eye sockets conducted themselves, striking her brain to order the body. She flounced forward, heart flowing and blood beating. No longer surrounded by the sweat and meat of the crowd, Bella was in full view of the blurred man. Feeling suddenly stagnant, Bella realised she was standing motionless. With the bass pumping into her and sound shifting through her long hair, the sea-eyed girl moved.
The moon drew the bleeding tide and soon the two bodies were fused together, eyes colliding, their rhythm matched.
As Sunny’s body hit the floor, his open head spewing blood and brains, the smile on his face vanished, along with his mouth. The sweaty room fell silent, the music congested, the floor shimmered in red silk. Bella stood above the carcass, her expensive shoes ruined.
Start with the middle.
Letting the music swirl past his head and ooze down to his feet, Sunny started to dance. Moving his hands first to his head, as the electronic pitter-patter slid over the yawning bass, elation crept over his shadowed face until a grin transpired and evaporated into the movement of his gliding feet.
Thick with the sweat of the room, Bella fixed her eyes on the dancing man. No-one came close to him, there was a natural barrier, a hormonal signal, he was given space.
As Sunny continued to move, his feet never staying still, signals from Bella’s eye sockets conducted themselves, striking her brain to order the body. She flounced forward, heart flowing and blood beating. No longer surrounded by the sweat and meat of the crowd, Bella was in full view of the blurred man. Feeling suddenly stagnant, Bella realised she was standing motionless. With the bass pumping into her and sound shifting through her long hair, the sea-eyed girl moved.
The moon drew the bleeding tide and soon the two bodies were fused together, eyes colliding, their rhythm matched.
As Sunny’s body hit the floor, his open head spewing blood and brains, the smile on his face vanished, along with his mouth. The sweaty room fell silent, the music congested, the floor shimmered in red silk. Bella stood above the carcass, her expensive shoes ruined.