Halloween story

[banbury]

This was my first TS story ever. I'd written it last year for Spook_Me!, post even without beta and was quite scared of my own impudence to write in the foreign language :-)
mab_browne had made me very generous offer to beta this story (I hope I'd corrected all mistakes :-)

and now ::tra-ta-ta-ta-ta:: you can read almost new Halloween story

Comments

[betagoddess]

Ooo! This was nice and spooky and I LOVE a good, spooky Hallowe'en story. Thanks! =>}

[banbury]

Thanks! I'm not very good at angsty stories, but tried to do my best :-)

[mab_browne]

Hey. :-) It's nice to see this out and about again, as I was starting to get paranoid that I hadn't done the beta right or something. (You are not all responsible for my neuroses *g*)

I am still in awe of the way that you're writing in another language myself.

[banbury]

Oh no! You'd done fantastic beta! Just fantastic, with so many really helpful remarks. It was so easy to correct! I just wanted to post it at the appropriate time, so to say, that's why it took me so long to go out with it :-)

I'd be very glad to give you other stories for beta, if you have time :-)

[snycock]

Ooh, that was very spooky! Great story for Hallowe'en...

[banbury]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it (::whispering:: wasn't sure it's truly spookie).