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banbury

For sentinel_thurs - Challenge #247 - Meditation

Jun 27, 2008 00:12

Written for sentinel_thurs challenge #247 - Meditation
Title: THE BREATH OF WOODS
Author: Banbury McBurg
Rating: gen
Warnings: AU
Word count: 496
Author'notes: unbetaed, all mistakes are solely mine

( The Breath of Woods )

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Comments 7

aerianya June 26 2008, 21:52:51 UTC

Lush and lovely.
Little tidbit wondered -> wandered?
He wonders through and accidental repeat of first sentence in two paragraphs?
Beautiful imagery though.

banbury June 26 2008, 22:10:50 UTC

Thanks! I corrected it. Was in a hurry to post right now *sheepish*. Though it's not an accidental repeat, i tried to master a certain rhythm.
Thank you for reading!

aerianya June 26 2008, 22:30:47 UTC

Wasn't sure but thought since I was being nosy and all.
See even I goofed in my comment post
Should have been "Beautiful imagery throughout".*g*

janedavitt June 27 2008, 00:27:03 UTC

Beautiful! Love the breath imagery.

banbury June 27 2008, 13:42:37 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

snycock June 27 2008, 03:25:14 UTC

Lovely image; the two of them meeting in such a sacred and awesome place...

banbury June 27 2008, 13:59:21 UTC

Thank you! I love this place very much and it suits Jim and especially Blair, I can picture them strolling along the path :-)