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Jan 18, 2010 22:39

kevin/nick

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dizzydaisy2393 January 19 2010, 21:56:28 UTC
This makes me melty and sad. I love your interpretation of the song.

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bananahater336 January 28 2010, 23:00:52 UTC
Thank you. =)

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paulsdoll January 24 2010, 05:37:33 UTC
Short but marvelous. I love everything you do, even when it's in first person, which makes it a little more interesting.
And it's so believable, something tells this is true. :)

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bananahater336 January 28 2010, 23:06:34 UTC
I enjoy writing in first person; it's more interesting for me as well.
Thanks so much.

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chizwiffle January 28 2010, 02:32:18 UTC
This is heartbreaking. Some of it rings so truly for me though, and I can really feel what Nick is going through. I'm not sure if that even makes sense, but I definitely know that Kevin should be with Nick way more than he should be with Danielle. The idea of a slight role reversal, of Nick being the romantic one and Kevin being the more logical one, the realistic one, is so true also. Because if shows you how much they are brothers, how much they have a bit of both in the both of them. Where Nick got his logical nature from, but at the same time how he has that romantic Kevin has in him too. Again, I'm probably not making sense, so just know that it's so perfect and bittersweet. I love these boys and I've never seen anyone write Kevick better than you, babe. Seriously. It's so perfect. I love you.

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bananahater336 January 28 2010, 23:15:30 UTC
Thanks, love.

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