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bana05

Fic: The Jinn's Debt

Dec 05, 2010 09:55

Ruya was considered nobility in her village, a princess for lack of a better term, because she was the descendant of a shunned, hideous griot and a jinn. That the griot had birthed the most the most beautiful baby anyone had ever seen without lying with a man should have left the her banished; instead, it had gained her the village chief as a ( Read more... )

fic, a/g, merlin

Comments 6

neela_barnett5 December 6 2010, 00:20:55 UTC

just reviewed the whole epic story, but I have to give special mention to this line:

Considering all of the names that could go down in infamy, Guinevere was by far one of the loveliest.

For some reason, it's just so sweetly tragic, i had to point out how nice it is!

bana05 December 6 2010, 00:36:17 UTC

thank you very much for reading! I appreciate it!

vaberella December 6 2010, 02:05:39 UTC

Great chapter. Baby Guin is a sweet heart to say the least. I liked reading about Ygraine, I adore her---and let me tell you that actress looks freakishly like Bradley. Woah. I was wondering about Arthur, because he looked nothing like Uther and then I saw Ygraine and I was like--WOAH. It's like they just put her face on the body of a Rugby player and called him Arthur. ^_^

I also like the more depth you're giving to Guin. I wonder if Guin will develop certain gifts later on. I also wonder about the debt to be paid.

Nimueh is great---I like that there is a bond between Nimueh, Ruya, and Gaius. Great story.

Oh and I might want to add that Kilgharrah and Ruya was teh awsomeness.

bana05 December 9 2010, 20:53:27 UTC

I'm all kinds of behind, but thank you! :)

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bana05 December 8 2010, 23:15:45 UTC

Thank you very much for reading! I truly appreciate it!

dreamon_dreamer October 4 2012, 21:10:02 UTC

this is great. this is epic. this is everything. you've managed to rekindle my wish to see gwen's mother on the show...thanks for that. i know it'll never happen. but gosh, how great would a flashback have been. as i'm sure i've told you before, i gave a shit about arthurian legend until i saw angel coulby on my tv screen, so i knew none of these details going into reading this, but it's obvi that you've done your research. and it's all mesmerizing to me, a total n00b. i hope i have time to read part ii tmw. well done, my dear.

also i still can't believe i somehow missed this. 2 years i've been depriving myself! ugh.