Comments | bana05: Fic: Unusual Commemoration

bana05

Fic: Unusual Commemoration

Jan 16, 2010 10:11

Today had been an ordinary day, well, as ordinary a day could be for a rotating servant in the castle. Today, Gwen had been tasked with removing cobwebs from just about every nook and cranny, which meant she’d been shivery with cameos of chattering teeth because the corridors were drafty and the windows could only do so much against winter’s chill ( Read more... )

fic, 2010, a/g, merlin, haiti

Comments 23

imigination January 16 2010, 16:40:50 UTC

okay my comment is going to make no sense and be mostly gushing but ...

“You shall keep your coins, Gwen,” Gaius said, closing her hand over the item with his own. “Considering all you have done, and what today is.”

I LOVE GAIUS. I love that he gave her a beautiful flower, and I love how Merlin just didn't have a clue, even though he's her BFF. Such a BOY.

Loved the initial banter between Arthur and Gwen when he first arrives ... his first and second requests ;D

“You weight little more than a sack of feathers, Guinevere. I could carry you.”

“Because that would be inconspicuous,” she said wryly, pulling away from his neck, but Arthur didn’t let her go far.

“Well, you did throw yourself at me that one time. No one would pay us any mind now.”

At the reminder of her public expression of relief, Gwen stepped out of his arms completely and walked around him. “It is best I stay here.”Love this. That they're so easy with each other and then he teases her and the wall starts to come back up ... I CANT WAIT FOR THEM TO JUST BE ( ... )

bana05 January 16 2010, 16:51:20 UTC

LOL, I told you long fic was long, but I'm glad it was enjoyable for you...and a relief! lol *hugs*

yalegirl03 January 16 2010, 17:07:14 UTC

That was great! You wrote everyone so well!

bana05 January 16 2010, 17:44:44 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

adrith January 16 2010, 19:29:25 UTC

Woman, I have never seen this show before, and now I absolutely must.

This was so well written.

bana05 January 16 2010, 19:37:20 UTC

oh you must!!!!

Travesty that I don't have Merlin icons, but I'll rectify that at some point.

But, yes! Two series' worth of episodes you MUUUST watch. It's lovely and the cast has great chemistry. :)

Oh, and thank you for reading and liking it! I hope you're doing well! *hugs*

ext_537529 December 1 2011, 13:46:08 UTC

Wow this is beautiful :) everything about this is amazing!

bana05 December 1 2011, 15:35:20 UTC

Thank you very much!

hetairai January 16 2010, 19:42:28 UTC

*cheesing*

bana05 January 16 2010, 19:54:12 UTC

mancalahour January 16 2010, 22:11:43 UTC

Woah. I want to give this fic bread puddings and back rubs, and I don't even want to wait for its birthday. It's beautifully executed, and SO LOVELY.

bana05 January 16 2010, 22:25:27 UTC

thank you very much!