Tryst

Dec 16, 2010 02:31

I made this romantic and steamy haiku...a little easy but hard in syllables: English grammars tortures me (if you're know about English haiku, hokku, haikai...yadda-yadda).

Title - Tryst
Rating - M/NC-17
Summary - 30 haiku themes about a princess and a sky pirate, and their steamy evening tryst at the Phon Coast before the final battle. Set in entire ( Read more... )

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katmillia December 16 2010, 16:13:58 UTC
Awww, this is really cool! I really love the way you've done this! ♥ It reads very neat. :D

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joanne45 December 16 2010, 21:29:12 UTC
Ha, ha! Thank you...I made this for about five months that I didn't finished or complete it!

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phoenixblaze December 16 2010, 17:31:40 UTC
That was awesome! I've never seen anyone write a piece this way and it was perfect!

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joanne45 December 16 2010, 21:30:39 UTC
Tee-hee, thank you sweetie! My precious masterpiece...when I wrote it, the sensation of my sex drive burst meh, kya-ha-ha! Hope you'll like it!

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homette February 8 2011, 12:55:26 UTC
I love how this guided me through the emotions. It was sort of fun in a way.

This was great, I enjoyed it!

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joanne45 February 9 2011, 05:40:37 UTC
Thank you, sweetie. Hope you'll like it ^_^

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