Maybe All Rivals Do [Prince of Tennis ; MomoKai]

May 17, 2012 21:54

Title: Maybe All Rivals Do
Pairing: Momoshiro/Kaidoh
Rating: this is surprisingly pretty PG-ish
Summary: Momo spends a lot of time not thinking about Kaidoh.
Word Count: ~6600
A/N: MomoKai is the best. The end.

Maybe All Rivals Do )

pairing: momokai, characters: kaidoh, characters: momoshiro, fandom: prince of tennis

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spurious May 19 2012, 07:19:02 UTC
First of all, reading this fic gave me a really intense craving for hamburgers T_T

I loved so many things about it, I will try and make a list of some of them:

1. All the hinting at background couples :DDDD when Momo was noticing Inui's emoticon-filled texts I was like, lol yessss o/ and also Inui's attempts to date Tezuka, and Momo noticing that a lot of the tennis players he knows are gay, lolll

2. The Momo voice in general is really perfect, especially the parts where he thinks about how awesome he is ♥ and all of his over-the-top insistence to himself that he isn't interested in Kaidoh, I love it :D

3. Momo's ninja stealth theme music ♥___________♥

4. The stalking, lolll I love ridiculous stalking :D

5. KAIDOH'S KITTEN NAMED MOMO jsd;lfajsd;lfkjsadlkfj the cutest T_T

6. The first kiss and how Momo ~doesn't want to lose~ a;lsdjflsdkjf they're so perfect *_* And then Ryoma walking in on them!! I love Ryoma being all blankface and "yeah sure whatever" about it ♥ and a;lsdkjflkj "WE WERE JUST FIGHTING IN A MANLY WAY" lolololol

7. I love the weird awkwardness after the kiss and how Momo just wants to make out but also won't actually initiate anything and instead follows Kaidoh home and makes him buy him food. They're just so cute T_T

8. The end is so perfect, how they are still fighting while also being all up on each other :DDDDD

In sum: perfect Momokai!!!!!!!! It was the most awesome thing to read on a friday afternoon ♥

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happiestwhen May 22 2012, 13:12:20 UTC
You are the best person to get comments from. ♥♥♥♥♥

I was rereading my old prince of tennis stuff and I seriously think every single one has a reference to data pair in it somewhere. It is like my ~signature~. T_T

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