Stakeout [Prince of Tennis; Eiji/Mizuki]

[happiestwhen]

Title: Stakeout
Pairing: Eiji/Mizuki, Inui/Yanagi
Rating: PG
Summary: Eiji and Mizuki go spying on dates together. Sort of.
Word Count: ~2000
A/N: Well, it's my birthday and I'll write what I want to. Inspired by bloodybrilliant and chasingwhispers, with thanks to garlandgraves for shipping this pairing with me.

Comments

[grasshopper]

OMG Mizuki happened and I didn't notice? In future, please to be posting things when I am AWAKE.

I am still so in love with Inui the ancestorless alien. And it's so Eiji-like to think up such an endearing, insulting, crackpot theory *_*

God, your Mizuki is just so perfect here, so arrogant and ridiculous, and then that vulnerability in this line:

Mizuki has a strange, open sort of look in his eyes, like his ego has been hurt from Eiji's words and it's almost too much for him to take.

Is it wrong that I just wanted to pet him there? Also, I think "I hate you" may qualify as the hottest dirty talk ever, and I love that they both agree on that point and then get on with it.

So much OTP here, and that's even before data pair show up. Request for sequel: double date-o! Pretty please? ♥♥

[grasshopper]

Also, I didn't notice this the first time around: This is more exciting than browsing idol albums at the music store, at any rate. Oh, Eiji! And poor Mizuki, who qualifies as, like, the least uninteresting thing Eiji could be doing :(( XD

[bloodybrilliant]

Request for sequel: double date-o! Pretty please?

YES PLEASE!!!!! I SECOND THIS! I'll third and fourth it if necessary! ~_^

Also? "I hate you"? Yessssss. So hot. :> RAWR. Eiji/Mizuki is so hot.

[waxrose]

*flails*

carrying the flowers like they're a scientific specimen, holding them out in front of him, his grip tight and careful. < - you write Inui the best omg.

This was hilarious and just awesome. It should be your birthday every day. :DDD

[alice_and_lain]

*laughs and laugh and laughs*

Lovely! Seriously, there are lots of wonderful lines in here. I think my favorite part is:

"Nyah, Fujiko, I would come over but I'm busy!!" - Mizuki pushes Eiji over and tries to grab the phone away - "I can't talk right now, I'm pinning Mizuki to the ground and- Ow! He just bit me again!"

"Nfu!" says Mizuki, looking triumphant. "Now let me talk to Fuji Syuusuke."

I don't know why, the triumphant little nfu amuses me to no end.

[bloodybrilliant]

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[reddwarfer]

AWESOME. BRILLIANT. That was just WIN one million and two ways. I was dying. You nailed Eiji's voice without being annoying or obnoxious. Same with Mizuki. Brilliant.

:D

[happiestwhen]

Thank you so much, Leila! :D :D