Curiosity's Toll

[balloonhat]

Comments

[cedarwolfsinger]

This is lovely!! It mirrors some of the words spoken at a Memorial Service I attended yesterday. Truly beautiful! BTW -- Welcome back!!

Quite beautiful!

[ext_3005551]

Firstly, WELCOME BACK :) I remember you from when I was part of the flame like 3 years ago or something :)

I love your repetition at the end, with short pieces I've found it's very hard to integrate repetition successfully but you've done a great job here.

That lock of hair feels very tangible. Really, really nice!

[missflyer]

Lovely vivid imagery, I can just see the things the narrator gives up... but what exactly is he/she giving it up for?

[darlinleo]

Oh, and what will Paradise be with all that spent :( Lovely, and sad, and delightfully trippy! I love that you're writing with us again!