Hey, sweetie!! sorry for not commenting earlier, but I really like your fic!! this chappie was really sweet!1 and what Reita wrote to Ruki was just gafgagfasgfdgfdah it made my heart melt! *giggles*
I'm really glad you got a beta-reader, too!! She's doing a great job! :3
I can see Reita was already interested in Ruki BEFORE Kai approached him, am I right? and the way he decided to change for him... it wasn't only because he would get the money. It was genuine. At least that's the feeling I got. ^w^
And OMG.. when I read "Bésame el culo" I couldn't stop laughing!!! xD I'm a native Spanish speaker so I got that one right away!! And the idea of Kai teaching Ruki how to say that phrase is even more amusing!! xD
Like I said... I really like this fic. Keep up the good work and continue practicing in order to improve even more, hun!! Ganbatte!! *w* Can't wait for the next chappie.. and.. just in case you ever need help, you can count on me, too!! :D I'll add you to my friends list, okies? You can add me back if you like!! :D
Hello Thx for your lovely comment. I really like the great job that my beta did to the fic and I really thx her for wanting to help me. You're right, Reita had an interest in Ruki before Kai approached him.Reita thought that the best whey to get Ruki's attention was to change a little for the best of both of them and it seems that it worked and Reita got Ruki's attention. Hes not really good at writing his feeling but at last he tried and is sad that there's no many boys who show's their feeling like that. Cold as in outside but melt and sweet like hot chocolate inside.^^ I'm glad that you liked the part with Besame el culo. I don't know how did I got to this idea. It just came to me. Is great to meet a native Spanish speaker like you
I'd love to be friends, I added you back ^^ I promise that I'll post the new chapter soon.
OMG this --> Cold as in outside but melt and sweet like hot chocolate inside.^^ fahffdahfdjhag... You are SO RIGHT!! I LOVE boys who are like that!! Too bad there aren't too many of them like this and DAAAAAAAAMN they're so hard to find... and if you do, they're either taken or into boys. xD
Ohh thankies! I just read your profile and you seemed like a really sweet person, so I added you. Thankies for adding me back!! I don't write fanfiction /sadly/ BUT.. maybe you'll find a few things you might enjoy there (and maybe download xD) in my journal. xD Besides laughing at my posts, that is xDD
I hope we can talk again soon and get to know each other more!! *w* and no hurries with the next chappie, dear!1 Take you time :3
oh thank you for your sweet comment ^^ I kinda sad that there aren't many boys like that^^. I like a lot of things. When I don't make fanfic I write poems or lyrics or when I don't do that then I draw ^^
I get inspired for my fic from a lot of things cause I see people in a different whey and that's kinda cool.
haha I really enjoy talking and I'm happy that you read my story and posted comments like these . It really makes me happy. I have to thank you and people like you for posting sweet comments like these but enough of me. Tell me something about you^^
hey! sorry, I didn't comment before, too, but I like this fic~~ ^^ it is cute how Reita wants Ruki so much, that he does that things all for him. *sigh* if all guys were like that - or like j-rockers 8D - lol.
waiting for next update~
btw if your beta won't have a time, you can contact me ^^ my mail: karin.uvackova@gmail.com I wanted to ask you before, but I saw that you have a beta already...
hello Oh thank you for this comment. I'm happy that you offered to cooperate with me and surely I will ask for your help in my future fanfic^^ Is so need to say sorry if you didn't added a comment ^^ I'm happy to know that you read it and liked it. Is a little sad that there isn't much guys like them ^^
This has been interesting story, I can say. At first I really read that Reita's description like "AAR DISGUSTING, HOW CAN HE LIVE WITHOUT SHOWERING" so I have to say I liked that change of his.
Please, continue. I would like to know what happens in the party! And answer to your question about how about more than four chapters, yes, I wouldn't mind that either.
I'm really glad to know that you read my story and that you liked it.
About Reita yeah I wanted him to look like one of those bad ass guys who "you're" afraid to talk to. You know guys who makes an attitude fore people to be scared of him but then changing the moment they feel like. You know hard like a rock outside but sweet like a hot chocolate inside.
I'll make much more chapters where action, drama, romance and sustenance won't stop surrounding them. Thank you so much
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I'm really glad you got a beta-reader, too!! She's doing a great job! :3
I can see Reita was already interested in Ruki BEFORE Kai approached him, am I right? and the way he decided to change for him... it wasn't only because he would get the money. It was genuine. At least that's the feeling I got. ^w^
And OMG.. when I read "Bésame el culo" I couldn't stop laughing!!! xD I'm a native Spanish speaker so I got that one right away!! And the idea of Kai teaching Ruki how to say that phrase is even more amusing!! xD
Like I said... I really like this fic. Keep up the good work and continue practicing in order to improve even more, hun!! Ganbatte!! *w* Can't wait for the next chappie.. and.. just in case you ever need help, you can count on me, too!! :D I'll add you to my friends list, okies? You can add me back if you like!! :D
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Thx for your lovely comment.
I really like the great job that my beta did to the fic and I really thx her for wanting to help me.
You're right, Reita had an interest in Ruki before Kai approached him.Reita thought that the best whey to get Ruki's attention was to change a little for the best of both of them and it seems that it worked and Reita got Ruki's attention.
Hes not really good at writing his feeling but at last he tried and is sad that there's no many boys who show's their feeling like that. Cold as in outside but melt and sweet like hot chocolate inside.^^
I'm glad that you liked the part with Besame el culo. I don't know how did I got to this idea. It just came to me.
Is great to meet a native Spanish speaker like you
I'd love to be friends, I added you back ^^ I promise that I'll post the new chapter soon.
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OMG this --> Cold as in outside but melt and sweet like hot chocolate inside.^^ fahffdahfdjhag... You are SO RIGHT!! I LOVE boys who are like that!! Too bad there aren't too many of them like this and DAAAAAAAAMN they're so hard to find... and if you do, they're either taken or into boys. xD
Ohh thankies! I just read your profile and you seemed like a really sweet person, so I added you. Thankies for adding me back!! I don't write fanfiction /sadly/ BUT.. maybe you'll find a few things you might enjoy there (and maybe download xD) in my journal. xD Besides laughing at my posts, that is xDD
I hope we can talk again soon and get to know each other more!! *w* and no hurries with the next chappie, dear!1 Take you time :3
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I kinda sad that there aren't many boys like that^^.
I like a lot of things. When I don't make fanfic I write poems or lyrics or when I don't do that then I draw ^^
I get inspired for my fic from a lot of things cause I see people in a different whey and that's kinda cool.
haha I really enjoy talking and I'm happy that you read my story and posted comments like these . It really makes me happy.
I have to thank you and people like you for posting sweet comments like these but enough of me. Tell me something about you^^
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it is cute how Reita wants Ruki so much, that he does that things all for him. *sigh* if all guys were like that - or like j-rockers 8D - lol.
waiting for next update~
btw if your beta won't have a time, you can contact me ^^ my mail: karin.uvackova@gmail.com
I wanted to ask you before, but I saw that you have a beta already...
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Oh thank you for this comment. I'm happy that you offered to cooperate with me and surely I will ask for your help in my future fanfic^^
Is so need to say sorry if you didn't added a comment ^^ I'm happy to know that you read it and liked it. Is a little sad that there isn't much guys like them ^^
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At first I really read that Reita's description like "AAR DISGUSTING, HOW CAN HE LIVE WITHOUT SHOWERING" so I have to say I liked that change of his.
Please, continue.
I would like to know what happens in the party!
And answer to your question about how about more than four chapters, yes, I wouldn't mind that either.
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About Reita yeah I wanted him to look like one of those bad ass guys who "you're" afraid to talk to. You know guys who makes an attitude fore people to be scared of him but then changing the moment they feel like. You know hard like a rock outside but sweet like a hot chocolate inside.
I'll make much more chapters where action, drama, romance and sustenance won't stop surrounding them. Thank you so much
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