Easter Island outline 3.03: Getting close yet?

Jan 21, 2008 09:35

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damanique January 21 2008, 12:39:54 UTC
Man, this story sure keeps changing! :)

Let's see... somehow, Scene 11 doesn't entirely make sense. How come her father's doomed, and she can escape? Why would there be no point in going after him, and why does the statue say that? Is it necessary for it to say that?

And then, the Shaman. Instead of 'crushed and breaks down', perhaps 'shocked and angered' is more in place. Like, that is the moment where the Shaman really becomes an evil persona out of jealousy of Kaula, because she can speak to the statue and he cannot. So instead of breaking down, he instantly gets that vicious gleam in his eyes.

Also, if you need a good voice actor, I may know someone (not myself, heh).

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bakenius January 21 2008, 13:19:03 UTC
Let's see... somehow, Scene 11 doesn't entirely make sense. How come her father's doomed, and she can escape? Why would there be no point in going after him, and why does the statue say that? Is it necessary for it to say that?

Yeah, that's a bit of a weak point isn't it? The idea is that statue knows what's going on (the Chief is going to pronounce change and will be crossed by the Shaman) and predicts that it'll be fatal for the Chief and the Clan in the long run if the Shaman completely takes over and wants to save Kaula and thus urges her to flee. Again. It's quite a lot and it's weak. We have to think about that one.

And then, the Shaman. Instead of 'crushed and breaks down', perhaps 'shocked and angered' is more in place.
Also, if you need a good voice actor, I may know someone (not myself, heh).

Cool. Male/female? What age? Capable of physically visit a sound studio in Hilversum?

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damanique January 21 2008, 17:08:20 UTC
Male, 30, can drive himself around in own car, also my boyfriend. XD

But I'm not kidding - he's aspired to do voice acting work and he hosts a radioshow. He's definitely talented and can do different tones/intonations very well. I can ask him to send you some samples if you want, then you can judge for yourself. :D

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bakenius January 22 2008, 09:00:24 UTC
Well, now I am intrigued. Well, next to a good sounding voice it's most important that he's capable of dealing with and acting upon dramatic directions of an obsessive director. I know I can be pretty demanding and specific as it comes to vocal performance and it doesn't always works out. But if this doesn't scares him off I do like to hear some samples. :)

Also another reason to trow a new Geekfest, I like to meet this man in action. ;)

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damanique January 22 2008, 09:07:58 UTC
Well, I know he isn't the type to back out of a challenge or get scared off easily. Anyway, his username is rob_d so you two can go contact eachother and everything ;)

New Geekfest, yeesss!! You must throw one! *hypnotises you*

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bakenius January 22 2008, 09:27:55 UTC
Anyway, his username is rob_d so you two can go contact eachother and everything ;)

He already messaged me 10 minutes after posting, he must be scanning this page like a hawk. o_O

New Geekfest, yeesss!! You must throw one! *hypnotises you*

I'll make a post at geekfestnl about it as soon as I have time to write. (not this illegal typing-ljcomments-in-the-boss-his-time stuff ;))

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damanique January 22 2008, 09:30:09 UTC
No, I already talked to him about it, LOL. XD

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