[fic] beginning a new life with you chapter 1

[bakanishi08]

.TITLE : beginning a new life with you
PAIRING: reader(YOU!) x jin akanishi
GENRE: ROMANCE
RATING: PG - NC17
CHAPTERS: ONGOING
Disclaimer:i own jin. not. and of course this crazy plot^^(peace)
SUMMARY: you are a cafe attendant,,,living together with your bestfriend  in your apartment, decided to enroll to a school.. studying + working is hard for you..

Comments

[kougazgurl]

Please put this under an LJ cut. If you don't know what this is, go to the FAQ.

[bakanishi08]

gommen ne, i'm just new here

[kougazgurl]

It's fine, I was just saying, I was new here once, and when I didn't put it under a cut I got all these comments about, "Oh, you can't do this", "Post it right or don't post it", Yadda Yadda.

I'm doing this out of kindness. xD

But yeah, you can just go into the "Edit Post" link and click on the button with all the gray lines and the one gray line that looks like a heart meter thing, sorry if I explained it weird. xD

[bakanishi08]

then could i repost it again??

[yshkn_miharu]

nice fic.. waiting to read the chapter 2~ ^_^

[bakanishi08]

haii^^arigatou you like it^^it's my first fic so...there will be many mistakes^^arigatou again^^

[yshkn_miharu]

daijoubu~ganbatte ne!! *\(^o^)/*

[yamashita_pink]

^^ nice story...
can't wait for chapter 2... :D ^^ :)

[bakanishi08]

arigatou^^

[jinstrickenpig]

mukyaaaaaaations to the maximum level!!!!!! ahahaha... i was having a lot of fun reading this... i've been waiting for this kind of fic for ages!!!!! it just gave me the kind of imagination i needed as a fan... domo arigatou,thank you for sharing!!!! love you for this... please do continue, i would like to know the continuation of "OUR" love story... Mukyaaaa!!! super dokidokiation!!!!! *flails* *reads again*

[bakanishi08]

doumo^^! thanks for reading^^ i'm doing chapter 2 now^^

[high5_for_akame]

for me it is a little very tiring to read these style

I am in blur right now I try to understand the thing that you try to spin for the plot....

you should try reading more fiction preferable by native English writers... so you can see and adopt a style that can fit more for a decent read...

I am not saying I don't like it but it's gets a little dizzy after some time... and I am used with hard core native fics :))=))

I will be stalking you for more updates and you should try to find a beta reader... they can do guide you:)):))

[high5_for_akame]

really don't hate me

[bakanishi08]

it's ok^^gommen ne, maybe because i don't have any close friend here yet^^