1246 Words & Quidditch Dreams
on ATFD, first draft of scene 3. It felt really exposition-y, and a bit rambly. I'm going to see what I can do to tighten it up before posting it to enae.
I also stumbled on a way to lead into the main conflict in the next Dayan scene. One which makes a lot sense than what I'd planned before.
I think I'm going to add an Enae scene, next. It wasn't planned in, but I need to show her reaction to what happened in scene 2, as well as intro Diran Lendrie.
I took a mini-nap at work, and I had a really cool dream. I was playing quidditch, swooping through the air. (I don't remember any details such as position or team, just the feeling of flying and swooping and catching the ball.)
Wheeeeeeeeeeeee!
A nice change from the nightmares, incomprehensibles, and nothingness that are my usual run of sleep activity.
I also stumbled on a way to lead into the main conflict in the next Dayan scene. One which makes a lot sense than what I'd planned before.
I think I'm going to add an Enae scene, next. It wasn't planned in, but I need to show her reaction to what happened in scene 2, as well as intro Diran Lendrie.
I took a mini-nap at work, and I had a really cool dream. I was playing quidditch, swooping through the air. (I don't remember any details such as position or team, just the feeling of flying and swooping and catching the ball.)
Wheeeeeeeeeeeee!
A nice change from the nightmares, incomprehensibles, and nothingness that are my usual run of sleep activity.