Comments | bagheera_san: Son of cliche prompts

bagheera_san

Son of cliche prompts

Jan 04, 2007 00:47

So, yesterday when I said, play with me? I didn't factor that I'm almost incapable of writing short fic. First I wrote a little HP snippet for satora_chan which I like quite a bit.

( Sirius/Remus, pretending to be gay, teen )

sv, hp, fic

Comments 47

jakrar January 4 2007, 01:31:39 UTC

Oh, wow -- I like it! You write desperate Clark both vividly and well, and I really love Lex's response. Thanks so much! I'll be waiting to see what you do with everyone else's prompts.

bagheera_san January 4 2007, 11:11:24 UTC

Yay! If everyone else's prompts get this long, I'll be writing prompt-fic for forever, but then, it's fun :)

arianstarr January 4 2007, 02:26:16 UTC

heh, that was great! Love the last line, and the dream imagery was powerful and well written.

bagheera_san January 4 2007, 11:12:00 UTC

:D The dream was my favourite part of it, too.

damos January 4 2007, 03:27:57 UTC

I love your use of senses, the use of smell and touch in the HP fic. And the end...

Sirius bites him, small, sharp, painful teeth, where his neck meets his shoulder and suddenly, everything shifts, suddenly, Remus' hands are clawing the leather of Sirius' jacket and his mouth is gasping for breath.

Suddenly, the lies and the truth are all jumbled together, and Remus can't remember where the lines went between them.

Wonderful.

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The SV fic is also wondeful. Ollie is so game and Lex is so... willing to go along to get along.

bagheera_san January 4 2007, 11:19:06 UTC

Thanks!
Ollie is so game Heh. Well, he's not one of those stuck up Smallvillers who need meteor madness to go wild.

damos January 4 2007, 12:45:49 UTC

Heh, SV just made it to Japan, so I'm not fully up on their characterizations... but it looks like Ollie is Ollie.

rosy5000 January 4 2007, 05:00:02 UTC

Yummy! Both Clark/Ollie and the Clex! :D Love Lex's reaction. Only he would laugh after finding out he was bonded to an on-again/off-again friend.

bagheera_san January 4 2007, 11:22:28 UTC

Lex at this point... pretty much just thinks "fuck the world, life doesn't make any sense anyways," so he just goes along with the insanity. (And hey, life-bond to Clark, that's not so bad.)

talitha78 January 4 2007, 21:17:57 UTC

"You mate for life. Serves you right." Then a thoughtful little pause. "I'm not reforming for you. Not unless you make some really good concessions as well. And I'm not sharing."

"What?" Clark tried to sit up, but Lex didn't go along with it, so Clark slumped back down. "Lex?" he asked plaintively.

"Shut up, I'm negotiating here."

These are such fantastic last lines!

bagheera_san January 5 2007, 00:39:16 UTC

Thanks :)