2014: Blue Nocturne (for EVERYONE)

[baektobaek]

For: EVERYONE
From: ANONYMOUS until December 30, 2014

Title: Blue Nocturne
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s)/Focus: Baekhyun/Xiumin
Length: 5,760 words
Summary: There has always been something missing from Baekhyun's life.
Warnings: slightly aggressive smut (but entirely consensual)
Notes: First of all, thanks so much to the Mods for being so understanding

Comments

[sinisterkids]

WOW this is gorgeous oh my god, a completely unexpected take on the prompt im!!!!! im sry u went thru so much trouble to write this (going by ur a/n) but the final piece is just beautiful. your imagery and diction is wow good god im truly floored His mouth meets Minseok's mouth and their lips tangle along with his fingers running through Minseok's ash brown hair as fireworks burst behind his eyelids; phthalocyanine to split the dark as his fingers run pitter patter skipping over the grooves between Minseok's ribs ("Don't forget me, don't forget me") and Minseok gasps and sticks his hands down Baekhyun's pants this para cut me deep T___T jdkggfh thank u so much for writing this!!!!!!!!!!!!!! honestly keep at it ur amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!

[drainbamage954]

This was a really interesting and delightful read. It was much softer than I had imagined and I felt like I was lost in Baekhyun's own undiscovered memory, just itching for that piece that was just out of reach. The way you wrote this felt very dreamlike, with the words, descriptions, and language. It felt like living in different worlds, the worlds of his childhood, the worlds of his disconnected present, and the world of his own personal search for his missing memories that meant so much. Initially jarred by it, I grew to really love how you explained his friends and connections to other people through small interjected explanations and details. It brought so much about both how Baekhyun's world is, how he experiences and relates to it, and how it communicates and resonates with it

[g_odalisque13]

this was so gorgeous. it felt like i was pulled into a dream when i read it.
your writing style is beautiful and it conveyed all of the built up emotiins and memories so well.
i loved the flashbacks and little pieces that.slowly came together to reveal exactly what it was that baekhyun was looking for.
this was wonderful ♡

[charliebnim]

So so lovely!!! Tho i dont really get why did they ended up having sex ... Ineed to re.readit tbh!!!*but your writingis fucking amazing !!! Also you should listen to piano dust by oohyoo!!! This fic reminded me a lot of that song

[tiny_estrella]

it's 4am so excuse my incoherencey BUT OMG THIS FICCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC
THE WRITNG THE FEELINGS THE EVERYTHING IT WAS SO BYUTIFULLLLL
The way you described the story the setting the ////feelings/// it rlly hist home and the flashbacks!!!!!!!!!11 i love how they go backward until he rmbrs xm finally!!! abd everthing starst falling into place afterwarsd
HET SNT THE ANGER THE LONGING THE SMITUTTTTTTTTTTTTT I LOVED EVERT BUT OF IT IT WAS SOI HAETW AND JSUT WOWWWWWWW im so glad they managed to work everything out and get their happy ending <333333333333