☁ it feels better in the dark

[baeklights]

i feel closer to your heart
chen/kai
pg-13

+ posted over here for chenpionships

+ listen to this fic mix made by sinisterkids bc it inspired a lot of this fic while i was writing.

Comments

[beautifulunfold]

Sooo, this is my first fan fiction I've ever read about EXO and I think also the first time I've ever commented on a story (Yes, one of those annoyingly horrible silent readers, sorry!) But I just couldn’t leave this without a comment because it's just so so good (Which is a fact I both love and hate, because how the hell am I going to read other good ones with these standards set?! But thank you :))
Moving on, I really like how they fell in love with each other. Like I was waiting for some kind of angst (and this was the first time I really didn't want that, because they were just so cute) and there was no angst! (Yeeeey!) And their pointless conversation, like it was perfect. It felt really like two real people evolving from friends to lovers. Honestly, only one question, does Sehun like anybody? Probably not, I read it like four times to find any hidden hint… I didn’t find it, so if it’s there, I’m sorry, I will read it again. (goes to stand in a corner) But I don’t think I will ever get tired of it, which also says a lot as I normally can’t read something a second time.
Disney? Love love love it! Dishonour on your whole family! Dishonour on you, dishonour on your cow (Cow? So random, love it!) This made me laugh so hard, my brother actually came to my room and threw a pillow at me. So worth it, thought. Still he had a point it was already past midnight, but who needs sleep when there is something like this on the Internet?
I also liked how it was set in the canonverse and how the other members made appearances, like Kyungsoo third wheeling (poor him). Loved the BFF moments between Jongin and Sehun, and between Jongdae, Baekhyun and Chanyeol. I loved the cookie-tactic (I use it too!)
And how Jongin as the feel a pulse and Jongdae has to hear breathing. (Adorable)
But most of all, I liked the hoodie/sweater moments. I wasn’t talking about the sweater - I know (No words needed)
Honestly, i can rant about this for hours, I will just make a summary: Honour on you.

Now, I want to apologize for my terrible English, I’m so sorry if it made you cringe… It’s part of the reason why I don’t comment on stories… It’s not my mother language, neither is it my second, probably third and my ranting, I'm a ranter :D (I don't think that's a word...)
(Off to read more of your stories, I promise I will comment on every single one of them!)

[baeklights]

omg. first, pls don't apologize for your english, this was such a super sweet comment. T__T

to answer your question, no, i wasn't really thinking of sehun having a crush/liking anyone? he's just maybe a little smarter than he seems. XD

thank you so much for your comment. T_T i wish i could leave you a reply as long as your comment, bc this was such a cute one, but all i can say is thank you. ♥