baekhyun x chanyeol; bandfic ; g ; 4800 words. in which baekhyun is desperately in love and chanyeol gets a girlfriend. warning : broken!baekhyun ( Where are you? I miss you. )
GIVE ME PART TWO ;_; I NEED A PART TWO ;_; WHERE IS IT.
*ahem* But in all seriousness, this is completely beautiful. Your writing style is very clean and flows very well but it still has some poetic license and I really like it! It's the kind of writing style that I really like to read. I don't know, it just makes a very good story that really enjoyable to read.
When I started reading this story I was waiting for my heart to be broken, but then when it got towards the end and I realized that Chanyeol had feelings for him I literally did a happy dance. I just felt such joy. I guess you got me very emotionally invested into the story, because I wanted to fucking celebrate.
The other thing that you did very well was write Baekhyun's despair. I know that sounds weird... but it felt very real. I especially love how you wrote the other members reacting to his depression; that felt very real. And that part with Minseok, oh my heart! He is such a little angel and he would totally do something like that if this ever were to happen. Look at that little angel, giving him hot drinks and comforting him. All my feelz ;_;
GIVE ME PART TWO ;_; I NEED A PART TWO ;_; WHERE IS IT.
*ahem* But in all seriousness, this is completely beautiful. Your writing style is very clean and flows very well but it still has some poetic license and I really like it! It's the kind of writing style that I really like to read. I don't know, it just makes a very good story that really enjoyable to read.
When I started reading this story I was waiting for my heart to be broken, but then when it got towards the end and I realized that Chanyeol had feelings for him I literally did a happy dance. I just felt such joy. I guess you got me very emotionally invested into the story, because I wanted to fucking celebrate.
The other thing that you did very well was write Baekhyun's despair. I know that sounds weird... but it felt very real. I especially love how you wrote the other members reacting to his depression; that felt very real. And that part with Minseok, oh my heart! He is such a little angel and he would totally do something like that if this ever were to happen. Look at that little angel, giving him hot drinks and comforting him. All my feelz ;_;
I REALLY NEED A PART TWO OKAY?
OKAY.
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