We'll go down together

[baeconandeggs]

Prompt#: 1
Title: We'll go down together
Word Count: 11097
Side Pairing(s): kaisoo,xiuchen,hunhan
Rating: pg 15
Warning(s): [click to open] Character death, angst, spy au
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The

Comments

[saemriel]

hi my dear author... first of all thank you for writing my prompt... this is one prompt that ive been keeping in my own treasure box but couldn't find the time and right inspiration to write to so really thank you...

thank you for including my favorite ships to... i mean it was really optional but thank you...

i forgot if my prompt has a spy!au but thank you for making it into a spy!au ahehehehe... spy chanbaek is hot!!!

there's some typos but its okay, i mean even i, tend to oversee typos in my own fic.. we are all humans anyways plus 11k words can be very tiresome to triple check or more... and even with all those checking... typos still tend to slip... i sometimes just give up on checking.. so its okay ahahahahaha....

when chanyeol burned the building... i was just like hell yeah yeol take revenge for baek and their shitty rule!!!

ok i mean this with a good heart and i hope you dont take it the wrong way... i also writes fics and i know im not a really good writer but i want to say these things that i noticed on your fic to encourage you more on improving your fic...

1. its a spy au! chanbaek are co workers... i think i just wanted to know more about the organization... how they are in the society of the au.. i mean are they a secret or like a typical office.. how are the rules develop like that...i mean what are their reasons for it...
2. they also have powers right...i hope there were some more scenes where they show their powers...
3. i felt like the ending the bit of a rush... i wish i read more of why baek blowing himself up is the best option but oh i love that he put on a shield for yeol... omg the love is there!!!!

but overall i REALLY enjoy this fic and i am REALLY thankful for you for putting out your time and effort and mind cells for this fic...i hope i dont hurt your feelings with those three that i said, im sorry if i did, i really mean it with a good intentions... i just want to encourage you more to write more... coz i know you can still improve... if you feel offended but what i said please feel free to tell me... im @saemriel on twitter...

this fic is GOOD, dont even think that its not.... it have room for improvement but it is definitely not trash.. i know firsthand that an 11k fic is not easy to do, i know that you put alot of effort for this fic and i really appreciate it.. so thank you... thank you for giving life to my prompt...

i will look forward to your fics and i just want to tell you that you have earned a fan...^^

thank you thank you thank you