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Of Princes and Paupers

May 29, 2017 00:13

Author: anonymous
Prompt#: 008
Title: Of Princes and Paupers
Word Count: 30,057
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s):[click to open]swearing, sexual content and references, violence, allusions to past character death
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, ( Read more... )

[round 3], rating: nc-17, word count: +30000, day 17

Comments 6

SPOT! emycyingztars June 5 2017, 04:33:18 UTC

WHY ARE THERE NO COMMENTS?

Okay anyway,

I'm just gonna say that this fic was like a satisfying arch of a water droplet on glass. The way Baekhyun didn't pursue becoming the Prince, the way Chanyeol slowly eased up to Baekhyun, and the way they grew warm to each other (Jongdae and Junmyeon can confirm this for me) made everything so perfect?!?!?

Onto the actual plot and storyline, holy HELL it was refreshing to read every single word. At first I was a bit confused and muddled with the wording of everything but then I realized I was just running on 4 hours of sleep and I had been reading BAE fics for 5 hours straight now. Then, I started from the beginning and everything pieced together beautifully.

I LOVE THIS AND WILL CHERISH THIS FOREVER.

RE: SPOT! oraceon June 14 2017, 20:09:41 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you were able to enjoy it after some sleep and it wasn't just my writing being confusing, haha.

hey_dy June 6 2017, 23:05:19 UTC

i loved this, thank you for writing it!

oraceon June 14 2017, 20:09:55 UTC

Thank you for reading!

ext_3626580 June 9 2017, 01:12:21 UTC

I was on the fourth paragraph, immediately checking the page indicator below when I fully realized I want this fic to be longer. ;( Your writing style got me hooked. How you describe the scene always felt like I was there. The setting feels so vivid as well, the 1900's vibe is so apparent. And Chanyeol is so hot OMG >< I really like the character's exchanges of conversation, it was so in character that you'll immediately recognize who said this particular dialogue. The hospital scene is so awesome. Baek got some wise moves. 😏 I love it ( ... )

oraceon June 14 2017, 20:20:42 UTC

Thank you for reading! I agree, I wanted to write more for this but unfortunately a lot of things came up in real life so this was all I could manage with an extension. I'm not the biggest on world-building so I'm glad you could catch the vibes of the time period ( ... )