Temporary Things

May 10, 2017 16:54

Author: anonymous
Prompt#: 122
Title: Temporary Things
Word Count: 10,127
Side Pairing(s): Minseok/Jongdae
Rating: PG13
Warning(s):[(click to open)]Implied smut, Homophobia
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The ( Read more... )

word count: +10000, day 5, rating: pg-15, [round 3]

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superlong and messy comment, i'm sorry. ext_3840120 May 11 2017, 04:18:11 UTC
first, ITS MY PROMPT!!!

2nd, this fic is amazing. my heart hurt so much reading it but i love the feeling (i'm a masochist just like baekhyun in this fic)

I love the storyline so much, not too rush also not too draggy. it was all on point and you got the angst I ask perfectly (I love you so much for that) cos indeed my heart was in pain at the sight of baekhyun holding his trueself and how chanyeol okay with all of this situation cos simply he wants the best for baekhyun and because he love him so much.

the part where yerim called chanyeol over, baekhyun went pale because he cant be seeing with chanyeol and starts having this thought about how people would see them and judge them, chanyeol knows and stopped his tracks.... that was heartbreaking 💔💔

oh and the sex part where chanyeol wants baekhyun to screams his name was too intense cos at the same time chanyeol feels that he needed to be sure baekhyun is his and only his. how he really wants the whole world to know that he's baekhyun's boyfriend. but yet he doesnt want to put baekhyun under pressure. I'M------ :"(((( i love chanyeol's character so much in this fic he's the sweetest ;-;

the party scene! XIUCHEN YAY i know theyre the side pairing but i didnt expect this at all lol huhu baekhyun finally show his trueself there and kissing chanyeol sighhhhsss all the butterflies 💕

and then YOU HURT ME AGAIN at the picture of yerim seeing her bff (who lied to her) kissing her first love ahdjsjjsndjs poor girl :((

okAY i didnt mean to comment everypart of this fic but IT WAS THAT PERFECT. i cant even.... sobs my simple prompt became this awesome. whoever you are thank you so so so much, for this amazing fic, for hurting me, and for make me happy after all the pain. i love you. I'll wait for reveals so i can thank you in person ❤

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RE: superlong and messy comment, i'm sorry. ext_3757050 June 15 2017, 03:50:07 UTC
hi! i am glad you liked it 💞 i was really anxious if the prompter would appreciate it or not but im so happy you did ㅠㅠ

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