The Heart of The Sea

May 08, 2017 21:23

Author: anonymous
Prompt#: 336
Title: The Heart of The Sea
Word Count: 3698
Side Pairing(s): N/A
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s):[click to open]N/A
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The original characters and plot are ( Read more... )

[round 3], day 3, rating: pg-13, word count: -5000

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anonymous May 9 2017, 07:45:50 UTC
this is so beautiful omg it's so short yet it is really satisfying to read
and baekhyun is so hot in this and chanyeol is so cute
omg i love this

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hunhamburger June 14 2017, 05:32:01 UTC
Thank you for reading <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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for_you_i_am May 9 2017, 09:35:36 UTC
Ahhhhhh this was so sweet! Pirate Baek is the best thing ever! I loved the way you wrote him, and the fic in its entirety -- your way with words is beautiful and you managed to fit so much story into a small word count, which is an enviable skill. The development of their relationship was really cute too ;; I really enjoyed it, thanks for writing!

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hunhamburger June 14 2017, 05:33:44 UTC
Aww thanks a lot :) I'm glad this fic was still good despite being on the shorter side (After seeing how lengthy a lot of the entries are, I was worried my fic would get missed :s)
I love your fics btw~ <3 Thanks for leaving a comment!!

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canadianexol May 9 2017, 17:33:37 UTC
I really liked the idea behind this. I wish it was longer so we could see more Baekyeol pirate adventures! :)

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hunhamburger June 14 2017, 05:34:56 UTC
Maybe one day I'll expand on it :) or maybe we will see more similar fics in the same AU!
Thanks for reading and commenting <3

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ext_4119122 May 9 2017, 23:09:05 UTC
Sassy pirate Baekhyun and a rather insecure Chanyeol, what a fitting pair in this story. Even though it was quite short, I enjoyed their characters and your style so much, it was a very fun read. Everything flew so smoothly, I loved the descriptions especially. And one of my favorite parts was this:

Baekhyun’s head lulled over his shoulder, his eyes gave off a mischievous glint in the moonlight. “Midnight fancies me.”

Chanyeol shook his head with a soft chuckle. “You think everyone and everything fancies you.”

Thank you so much for writing this au, I think it was my first time reading a pirate au, and I'm so glad I read it, I loved it so much <3

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hunhamburger June 14 2017, 05:36:33 UTC
I love sassy Baek hehe <3
I'm glad you liked the fic despite it being a bit short ><
Aww it makes me so happy when my fic is quoted <3 thank you~ (that part was one I defintely one of my favourites to write)
Thank you for reading and commenting :)

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gyuhanchanbaek May 10 2017, 02:16:37 UTC
I truly underestimated it ar first bcs of the wc only 3k.. but, it really beyond my expectation.. it is really good.. i like it, i still prefered it longer for deeper character building and situation.. but I love it! Its so sweeeet~~ good job authornim~~~

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hunhamburger June 14 2017, 05:37:40 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it :)
When I saw all the huge fic being posted I got a little intimidated >< but I'm glad people like you still took the time to read my fic :)
Thanks for reading and commenting~

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gyuhanchanbaek June 14 2017, 10:48:13 UTC
Just keep writing dear!^^
I appreciate every effort you took to write it because I cant even write it myself.. huhuhi

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