I Dreamed of the Most Beautiful flower; I Dreamed of You

[baeconandeggs]

Author: anonymous
Prompt#: 102
Title: I dreamed of the most beautiful flower; i dreamed of you
Word Count: 5,973
Side Pairing(s): -
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s):[click to open]none
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The

Comments

[thebakaberry]

Hi uhm I'm the op for this prompt and I'm so sorry that I'm late I'm so bad at remembering my prompt numbers but also uhm anyways I'm actually crying right now like tears streaking dramatically down my face because of this fic and I have no idea why like this was such a sweet fic and honestly just what I was in the mood for, it's like you knew. First of all thank you thank you so much for choosing my prompt and writing this beautiful masterpiece like oh my god I don't know what it is about this fic like maybe one part the aesthetic and about five hundred parts just the way you write (you've got a beautiful writing style, by the way, I could read ten thousands of your fics in fact hmu whenever reveals come around I'm your number one fan) but this fic just gave me a warm little feeling in my stomach and made my heart squeeze in quite possibly the best way possible. I love how subtle and sweet everything is like their chance meetings and just how they get to know each other -- I love how casual it all is, how realistically paced and everything. I didn't like quote stuff and live-react and I apologize, I'm just on mobile and it's actually the hardest thing to do in the world but you described Baekhyun's voice as chocolate and honestly if that's not the most accurate thing I've ever read, then I don't know what it is. I love the inclusion of other characters too like Sehun was a nice little addition, I love the additional dynamic he added to the story although he commented about Baekhyun being handsome and Chanyeol only said "Yeah I guess" and Baekhyun was :(((((( that was :(((((((( everything else though was so sweet like their kiss scenes and their reunion scene, if I could just quote that entire thing down here I would because that part was honestly just beautiful and my chest hurts but in the right way. I do have this one line quote though:

too immersed in voicing out his thoughts, he fails to see how Baekhyun, too, gets lost in Chanyeol’s smile. Because idk I think that this is just so totally sweet and I love it so much

Also though, shoutout to the nice little subtle hints that baekhyun was a vampire/old like him not eating and him knowing like 228472 languages. Also just the two of them talking art was just something I never knew I absolutely needed until now but thank you so much for adding in art talk and also those quotes from artists that was great. Most of all though, just kudos on that conclusion, that final scene where Baekhyun bites him that whole last paragraph just hit me straight in the heart and I love it so much. All in all, I love this whole thing so much and from the bottom of my heart, thank you so much for blessing me with this beautiful fic. I'm honestly so utterly happy and satisfied and I can't believe should made this beauty from my trash prompt you did such a good job. I'm sorry my comment is so incoherent I'm just crying and honestly sad that this fic is over (I'll probably go back and reread it ten more times) but I can't believe this was your first time writing a fic and participating in a ficfest(?) I hope you had a great and fun time doing all this and I also hope that you will continue to write and participate because you're so so good and the world needs more of your work. I had such a good time reading this I love you so much have a good day