Tip Toe

[baeconandeggs]

Author: bluedreaming
Recipient: parkbyun
Title: Tip Toe
Word Count: 3734 words
Side Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Zitao
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): unrequited love
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The original

Comments

[ext_2613782]

This is hurt me so much! I can feel pain in baekhyun T___T

[thebakaberry]

Well first, I'd like to say that I'd like to punch Chanyeol in the face. Like hOW COULD HE BE SO OBLIVIOUS WHEN BAEKHYUN'S BEEN RIGHT THERE ALL OF THIS TIME AND ASDFASGS

That aside. I love how this was written. Your writing style is so pretty; I love how the story flows starting from the present-day scene and then going back into the past -- I'm a sucker for reminiscent flashbacks tbh. And the way you defined Chanyeol and Baekhyun's relationship. The idea that Baekhyun was always so willing and so accepting toward Chanyeol, always there for Chanyeol when he needed him, the idea that Baekhyun was so close to actually confessing, so close to having Chanyeol in his grasps but losing his opportunity because of his own hesitancy... I dunno, that part just really got to me. Thanks for writing this beautiful story :)

[chelseywang]

amen okay preach.

[latchedwindows]

//hands author-nim the shards of my broken heart

;-; i'm weeping.

[sehunstea]

OH UNH FICKING GOD ??? i was reading and scrolling and hoping it wasn't gonna end up sad AND I KEPT SCROLLING AND IT KPET GETTING SADDER HOLY SHIT...

i'm in love w your writing style!! i also really loved the way the fic was structured. kind of a melacholic feel to it? idk im bad at this

this fic felt so real. i read so much best friends to lovers that i forget how much i enjoy reading onesided stuff EVEN IF IT DOES HURT MY SOUL...

woww i really do love the way this was written. can't wait for reveals so i can see more of what you've written !!! :-)

[mayangel7]

How is Chanyeol so unaware (but it's also kind of Baekhyun's fault because he never confesses)
I really liked the ending, even though it hurt because the last sentence! And the way that Tao comes in right when Baekhyun's about to confess... This story was so good, even if I was torn between smiling and crying at some of the parts.