got you under my skin

May 25, 2016 08:00

Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt #: 209
Title: got you under my skin
Word Count: 9,428 (it's a lie, half of this count is not words but... numbers and thumbs ups)
Side Pairing(s): squint for sekai
Rating: nc-17 (ig? it's just a little thingy at the end and the rest is just dumb)
Warnings: crack-ish but i can't crack, unconventional format!!!
Disclaimer:The ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, [round 2] posting day 15, word count: +5000

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IT'S ONLY WEDNESDAY winterdynasty May 25 2016, 16:38:23 UTC
This was so funny, I couldn’t stop laughing throughout it all. This was one of my favorite prompts that I prompted and I’ve actually rewritten this comment at least 3 times because I keep screaming in caps and it’s not cute so, here is a much more compact version of what I’ve been screaming about for at least the past hour <3 I love the way you wrote this, your format was very well done, from the interaction in the comments (All the baekyeol shippers were me I’m-- and SeKai flirting was A+++++ and YOU PUT AN ARMY IN THE COMMENTS I’M DONE) and the quirkiness of chanbaek’s video editing, even down to the video descriptions. I honestly enjoy reading fics that aren’t necessarily in a novel-like style because it’s so different -- I just really enjoyed it. Their characters were also super cute; I love watching character development, so this was so wonderful (Baekhyun saying “I’m still gonna steal your man” was absolute perfection, thank you for that). It was also super cute that you based these on Troyler because dorks, and chanbaek are dorks, and ajdkfjskajf. I also liked watching their relationship unfold through the lens of a camera and found it terrific that their first video together in the fic was the boyfriend tag *winks very obviously at chanbaek* ;) But now my soul is yearning for the “my boyfriend does my makeup” tag *o* Chanyeol singing to Baekhyun on camera was perfect. Chanyeol pinching Baekhyun’s nips on camera was also perfect. I actually screamed when Baekhyun called Chanyeol his boyfriend, I am so glad, thank you for blessing me. You nailed it so well, let me give you props for your amazingness. This honestly reignited a lot of feels I was afraid I lost, dear fic author, thank you for this wonderful piece of art you have created.

(I assure you you didn't ruin the prompt at all, and the mid-week birthday sex made my life; i must find this blog ;__; )

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RE: IT'S ONLY WEDNESDAY jadeu June 5 2016, 16:10:57 UTC
AHHHH DEAR PROMPTER IT'S YOU TTuTT IM SOBBING I'VE READ FICS BY U BEFORE AND IVE LOVED THEM and just knowing i wrote this for you im so embarrassed i just wanna hide
i'm veryyyy glad you find the humor laughable i think i tried too hard orz when i first saw your prompt i realllyyyyy wanted to write it but i was afraid to ruin it bc youtubers chanbaek is too precious for me to write i was really worried it won't turn out right so i wrote fics before deciding on the last minute to fuck it imma claim this
aaahh i try to portray the shippers generally (notice there are some thumbs down there bc some people just keep bursting chanbaek shippers' bubble smh) and you noticed the army omg i just- i saw this one tweet that says armys are literally everywhere and even on porn sites LMAO so. yeah. even here there's an army LOL
thank you *___* fic that isn't in a novel-like style is easier to write too i guess especially with this bc i get to cut when i run out of ideas OTL
"character development" /bites nails bc i can't remember thinking much about the characterization and just took out troyler's characters for chanbaek /hides
"my boyfriend does my makeup" oh..... why must you... give ideas like that.... now i wanna write it too... and i might have started a bit when i first read your comment.... so.... maybe....
/SCREAMS @ ALL YOUR PERFECTS HUHU WHY
i hope the feels this fic allegedly ignited within you will stay longer ;____;
tbh! i was really worried the sex was too out of concept bc then i had to remove them from YT lmao buttttt your prompt said nc-17 no there was no pg stuff only nc-17 and i died a lil bit ;A; so i added that last part (bc of your prompt and no it wasnt bc i was thirsty for some chanbaek porn myself i refuse--) so i was rly worried but seeing that you liked(?) it I AM SO FRICKING RELIEVED TvT
thank you for such an amazing prompt!!!!!!!!

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