Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt: #238
Title: Breakfast With The Fuzz
Word Counts: 79,000
Side Pairing(s): none
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): Mild sexual content; brief mentions of alcohol, drugs and their use; mentions of death and dead bodies (unnamed characters only); brief mentions of anxiety and suicide; brief depiction of police brutality; brief mentions
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I really like that you took it slow with everything. Relationship between chanbaek really well thought, their characterization was on point! Baekhyun's tragic past really killed me HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO BAEKKIE??? But seriously your Baekhyun here is very special like you built on his character really well. Chanyeol's character also amazed me. He's such a supporting boyfriend even though he had it rough no different. This story is really raw, like this could really happened in real life and imagining that someone could experienced what your baek experienced here is just so heart breaking. I also like how their loves still built up under this unfortunate situation. It proved how serious they are with one another. I love how this story not only gives me extra feels but also life lesson, that's my favorite part actually. This is seriously long but 100% worth it !
I almost hate on sehun here tho (sorry bb >_<) he's a jackass! Amber is a nice character, also Yoora even tho she only came out at the last moment.
Oh and the reason why I thought it would be sad ending is bcos (well, mostly on my negativity) I thought someone would kill Baekhyun in prison or or suicide, he's so depressed I was so afraid!!!! But I'm glad you're so kind enough to make this a happy ending, GREAT ENDING EVEN ! I seriously couldn't ask for more...you're really daebak ! I love you ! Receive my sarang juseyo! If you know this one chanbaek fanfic called "Baby's Breath" (awesome awesome fic), just so you know, your fic gave me the exact same feeling! That's how much I love your fic :')
Can't wait to know who you are...even tho I kinda have a feeling that I know you hahaha...well let's see then...that's all from me~
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To say that you took life lessons from this fic blows me away, haha, and I'm really happy it had that much of an effect on you. It's really nice to see that it's more than just a story to the people who have read it. It makes all the effort i put into it worthwhile.
And I thought I made Baek suffer enough, I couldn't give him a sad ending!! I very rarely write sad endings to be honest, haha, I'm more a happy ending kind of person. I'm so happy you liked the fic, and thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment, it really means a lot to me xx
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