Never forget

May 18, 2016 08:20

Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt #: 50
Title: Never forget
Word Counts: 2511 words
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): none
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The original characters and plot are the property of the ( Read more... )

[round 2] posting day 10, rating: pg-13, word count: -5000

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eterninitys May 18 2016, 04:07:28 UTC
Oh wow. ;;A;; I don't know what to feel about this. This is sad. And knowing that this is a canon au, it makes this story even sadder because somehow it feels like everything that happens in this story actually reflects their relationship in real life (we don't know how they feel irl, perhaps it's similar to this story, perhaps they really love each other) ;;;;;;;;;; I love the simplicity of this fic, it makes me wonder and think that not everyone is going to end up together, just... the thought of having someone you love by your side is more than enough, and you know that you won't stop loving that person even if they're not meant for you. (did i make sense otl i hope i did)

Thank you so much for this beautiful story <3

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owmichi May 18 2016, 10:08:02 UTC
WOOOOOW I REALLY REALLY LOVE THE SIMPLICITY AND SWEETNESS OF THIS LIKE REALLYYYYYY ☺☺☺ THEYVE GOT NOT LABELS BUT THEYRE CONTENTED WITH WHAT THEY HAVE SIDE BY SIDE BEING THERE FOR EACH OTHER EVRRYTIME UGH THIS IS SO CLOSE TO REALITY ITS MAKING ME CRY I LOVE HOW GENUINE AND EASY THEIR RELATIONSHIP IS HSFJKADHFJDHSKASKF AGH I REALLY LOVE CANON AND IM SO THANKFUL BC YOU CHOSE THIS PROMPT AND YOU WROTE IS SO ERFRCTLY I COULDNT ASK FOR MORE

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anonymous May 18 2016, 17:54:06 UTC
I dont usually read canon but this one feels so real ;w; in this simple and light fic we can feel their relationship is deep and they dont need to put title on it because we can actually see it. how comfortable theyre with each other, they helped each other, they play around like idiots. they complete each other sobs they must feel safe with each other's presence ❤

Thank you for such a beautiful fic ;-;❤

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THANK YOU~! clio323 May 19 2016, 02:50:13 UTC
when I prompted this, I didn't think it would be canon but wow I'm so glad that you went in that direction! Because this is where it hits the deepest, I think -- for Chanyeol and Baekhyun to be soulmates in the truest sense of the word. And you captured it beautifully in this story of yours! I can't thank you enough for this gift -- you wrote them both so earnestly and so intimately that I swear it felt like this story ~must be true.

/sighssssss/

I also really like how you chose to end it! I love love love how neither Baekhyun nor Chanyeol don't seem to be in any kind of hurry to label their connection or to define it. They don't make promises to each other. They don't get jealous of each other. They simply exist side by side and trust in their connection without question. Ugh, I really love this!

thank you thank you thank you~!

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baeksilisk May 27 2016, 07:01:18 UTC
"And he's always grateful to Chanyeol - for believing in him even when he's not ready to trust himself yet."

Every line in this fic is absolutely wonderful, I would quote it all if I could ;____; This has always been how I imagined their relationship off-camera, like they're always there for each other and they're comfortable just being by each other's side. Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story o(`ω´ )o

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