Heart Out
Title: Heart Out
Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt#: 341
Word Count: ~8k
Side pairing(s): slight!chanyeol/sulli, slight!sebaek
Summary: Chanyeol likes Baekhyun a lot. He doesn’t want anyone knowing that though.
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): a little underage drinking, cuss words, mentions of former members
Disclaimer:The celebrities’ names/images are merely ( Read more... )
Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt#: 341
Word Count: ~8k
Side pairing(s): slight!chanyeol/sulli, slight!sebaek
Summary: Chanyeol likes Baekhyun a lot. He doesn’t want anyone knowing that though.
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): a little underage drinking, cuss words, mentions of former members
Disclaimer:The celebrities’ names/images are merely ( Read more... )
THE STORY WAS PROGRESSING SMOOTHLY, sure they fought BUT THATS HOW IT IS IN REALITY.
Chanyeol was being such an asshole and I was so proud of Baekhyun when he acted the way he was supposed to; leave big-headed Chanyeol alone so he could reflect on the shitty things he's done to his so-called boyfriend.
BUT THEN WHAT HAPPENED
SUDDENLY FROM ONE KISS BAEK DECIDED TO FORGIVE HIM AND THEY CONTINUE DATING AND BE LOVEY-DOVEY, ACTING LIKE NOTHING SHITTY HAS EVER HAPPENED?!
Honestly, I'm just really disappointed :/ I'm all up for happy endings, but this just seems so unfair to Baekhyun. You made his character seem like such an easy person to win over TT
I know revenge isn't always the best way to go around things, but from all the shit Chanyeol pulled he should very well deserve a taste of his own medicine.
I don't intend to offend you with this comment 😞 sorry if I did. Your style of writing is amazing, and I just love the first 3/4 of the story. I think it was just how you ended things and the shallow portrayal of Baekhyun's character development that got me riled up.
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