Living on Borrowed Time

[baeconandeggs]

Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt #: 067
Title: living on borrowed time
Word Count: 15,323 words
Side Pairing(s) Kai/Sehun
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: graphic descriptions of murder, war scenes, depression, minor character death, permanent disability
Disclaimer:The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in

Comments

[for_you_i_am]

Wow this was excellenttttttt. I really enjoyed the graphic, visceral nature of your writing - so many details... sights, sounds, smells - I really felt like I was there, which is testament to the power of your description. I'm so relieved that things turned out well for Baekhyun and Chanyeol, even if they ended up with more than a few battle scars, and the ending was especially beautiful. It seems you either did a hell of a lot of research or you've been in the military yourself haha, I dunno which. Hats off to you either way, this was great.

[khrysallis1106]

omg wow thank you so much *--* I have a knack of describing things in detail, and I'm sort of glad that it didn't bore you haha~ I've never been in the military, by the way; I'm usually fascinated by all things war and military, which is why I was drawn to this prompt in the first place;;;;; thanks again for reading and for leaving such a lovely comment ♥♥

[lucifer_land]

This is a lovely piece of writing. There are so few stories about the war and you've done a brilliant job in telling this one. The pace was good, the characters were good. It was a pleasure to read.

[khrysallis1106]

Thank you ♥♥

[greeent]

reading this kept me on edge. i kept on questioning what's going to happen in the end, who's going to die? will they both live? how are they going to die? will they be able to say i love you to each other? will they be okay? am i going to be okay? ;;;;;
i like the bittersweet ending. i cried when i read about yura's husband orz ;_; because imagining that happening to you really broke my heart and i couldn't take the angst so i cried. then reading what made chanyeol to be so so alert in the field (what he promised to yura) made me cry even harder.

........sekai.......... jongin's message to baek before they part ways........

i'm always attracted to this kind of genre whenever i need to buy new novel to read. this kind of story only makes you realize how cruel the world is and how much you should be grateful ;; i'm sorry for rambling but i need you to know how much i love this story ;;;; i'm glad you joined the fest, i'm glad you wrote this. whoever you are, thank you ;_;♡

[khrysallis1106]

I am terrible towards my biases while writing, heh (• ◡•) which is why I killed Jongin off, woops. Thank you so much for reading and for leaving such a lovely comment!! <3

[ext_2659075]

woahhhh I'm just speechless, so impressed with the quality of this year BAE...so many awesome stories and plots INCLUDING YOURS! Another great story to read! I'm glad you make it a happy ending for chanbaek, they deserved it ! The intimate scene was so hot,I'm...speechless again. So sad for Jongin and sehun tho TT_TT that's so sad. Good job authornim, can wait to know who are you !

[khrysallis1106]

Thank you♥♥

[owmichi]

I AM SO IMPRESSED RIGHT NOW THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL BEYOND WORDS I FEEL LIKE IM WATCHING A MOVIE OH MY GOODNESS THANK U FOR WRITING THIS AND SHARING IT TO THE WORLD THANK U FOR BEING SO PASSIONATE ABOUT THIS FIC BC I TOTALLY FELT IT WHILE I WAS READING THIS AAAHHHHH IM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS FIC YOU HAVE NO IDEA DGDKSKDHSHHAA I EVEN CRIED AT THE MENTION OF SEKAI LIKE OMFG JONGIN DIDNT MAKE IT AND TO CHANBAEK HAD THEIR HAPPY ENDING, SEHUN DIDNT AND ITS JUST SO SAD HOW LOVE COULD END LIKE THAT. IM SO THANKFUL CHANBAEK'S DIDNT END THAT WAY!!!! EVERY CONVERSATION CHANBAEK HAD EVERY KISS EVERY LOVE MAKING GOSH I FELT THEM AND IMLITERALLY CRYING OVER HOW PERFECT AND AMAZING THIS FIC IS I COULDNT THANK U ENOUGH

[khrysallis1106]

Thank you for your spazzy comment *___*♥♥