tell me what is love

[baeconandeggs]

Author: ANONYMOUS
Recipient: ordinary_days01
Title: tell me what is love
Word Counts: 7626
Side Pairing(s): sekai, suchen
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): minor character death
Disclaimer:The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The

Comments

[thebakaberry]

This is soooo good why has no one commented??? Doesn't matter, I'll happily claim this first spot as my own :3

So like first, I want to say that this line:
he knows that not all love stories are allowed a happy ending. He can only hope he's lucky enough.
I love love love this line like I don't think you understand like oh my god

Okay. So when I first looked at this I noticed the thing that said character death (I did not notice the minor part lol but that's okay) so throughout the entirety of this fic, I was treading cautiously, constantly wondering when one of them was going to be killed... What actually happened... Well... I can't say that that's a better ending for the two ;; I mean there was foreshadowing but I DID NOT EXPECT CHANYEOL TO JUST NOT SHOW UP LIKE THAT LIKE MY HEART HOW COULD YOU SO THIS

Apart from the angsty ending. Your style of writing is really nice. I really love the way you phrase some of them things (like my favourite line. Dear lord I love that line like idk) and while you can tell that there's gonna be some angst later on, there's still so many cute moments between the two that makes you forget the impending pain LIKE THE SWEET POTATO THING. THAT WAS SO CUTE AND THEN THEY HELD HANDS AND THEN THEY--

Anyways. I really love this! Thanks for writing and I'll be looking out for you at the reveals~~